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    Default who whoulda thought???

    yo i been up all night and this is what i came up wit,its a new style for me so be honest.


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    Default Re: who whoulda thought???

    I like it but the beat wasn't workin' fo' me. It would have cool parts but the e-piano just has alot of distorted sounds. But lyrics wise I understand the song, way better than shit on tha radio.
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    yeah beat is def. not doing it for me, but good lyrics.

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    wow u sound a lot like camron, definately not feeling the beat...i think something quicker and more soulful would hotter for this
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    Default Re: who whoulda thought???

    the beat kinda weird. but the lyrics coo

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    weird is good...weird is different.

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    Oh no, Oh no!
    Not doing it for me
    The lyrics is way to superficial, and the piano doesn't give the flow a good rap song has
    Rated: 4/10

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    Default Re: who whoulda thought???

    okay here is why this is good:

    Lyrically its hot well written and i can tell that you mean every word of this and that is what i like to hear when im listening to artist...im feeling your voice your flow and your delivery and i like your bravery for stepping out the box.

    This is why it needs works:

    The beat is well put together but the sounds are not hip-hop sounds too digital. The beat is also not loud enough either that or your too loud and the piano was just ruff. The hook is trash i don't even remeber it. That is an example of a bad hook, if i dont remeber anything im suppose to remeber that

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