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    T.A.N.G Life Warm Up - YouTube

    This is the intro track to my newest mixtape!

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    Default Re: Warm Up-Novacaine

    Not a fan of "look at how cool I am" lyrics. I'd like to hear something from you that has more substance ... you've obviously got the talent. But I'm just an old white guy, what do I know? *g*

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    i can feel that!! Go to this link and jam the second track or dead presidents, i have a few with good substance. thing is, i do it all. but chose to share that because that track was the designated intro. Novacaine Mixtapes - #T.A.N.G Life | HotNewHipHop

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    I clicked cuz your name... and i wasnt disappointed mos def lookin for more of your stuff and subbed on YT

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    Not bad. You're definitely comfortable on the mic which is great...and you had some clever lines which was cool. My critique is 1 some of your lines/delivery felt rushed and was a LITTLE (barely noticeable) off beat. As a listener it felt like you wanted to get the whole line out but it was too many syllables so you just said it a bit faster...at that point it sounds rushed. Your content is your content and as I get older I feel its not my place to tell rappers what to rap about so if you like spittin bravado rap thats cool with me...I do it too...as well as the more deeper shit. What I will say tho is that your style isn't very different than your run of the mill rapper. You have swagger, lyrics and presence but nothing about your style seems original or different than any other rapper with those qualities. Its not a knock or hating...I just want you to grow as an artist and push yourself more because you have a lot of key elements already.

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    i feel that. and yeah i noted when i recorded it that i was off on a few parts too! but at the same time the role of this track was to get people to listen to the rest of the mixtape. and this track is one of the less clever tracks, the reason i called it warm up was to not start the project off with "punch line" overload or anything like that.

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    Ok delivery with the new YM type flow
    Some good punches clever rhymes
    Very good for a nice intro
    Not the most original but shows some good ability

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    not bad, i like your voice and vocal presence, swear I've heard that ray charles rhyme with another rapper though liek B.O.B or sum shit, but nah, doubt you would bite styles bro cuz da rest of your lyrics is str8 dope and never heard before. feeling your style and your flow is str8 constant rollin. keep em coming bruv -peace

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    Default Re: Warm Up-Novacaine

    On point! One of the better artists I've heard on here.. Good delivery I'm feeling it

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