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    u sound like you got down syndrome or something, you cant make out what your saying bro, maybe its just a weird accent, but it aint sounding right

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    that beat is pretty tight I must say. but honestly, on the verse part i think you need to deff work on your timing. but it wasn't bad at all.

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    do you think someone with down syndrome could clown u like i do drage read the post no dick ridin/hater based opinion u dumb hoe, @tucky im not a rapper and i never tried 2 be a rapper until now so this is really my introduction into rapping i know along the way im gonna make mistakes and will become more shaper as time passes so thats the issue with the timing and @drage its the accent u hoe we dont sound like politically correct raised bitch pussys like the uk and its also tryna rush the words since im reading the lyrics im not a rapper it takes time to flow the words correctly without messin up but fuck u know bout rappin u make techno beats
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    Quote Originally Posted by Serie View Post
    @tucky im not a rapper and i never tried 2 be a rapper until now so this is really my introduction into rapping i know along the way im gonna make mistakes and will become more shaper as time passes so thats the issue with the timing
    I didn't mean it in a bad way dog. I think you got lots of potential. cause the quality was on point. you aactually have a good tone in your voice I'm sure with some practice you could do some damage

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    naw me neither homie was just explaining the situation its still all love and dont bullshit me with the potential shit lmao this garbage at this moment in time

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    dont bullshit me with the potential shit

    beleive me pimp. I've heard MASS amouts of newbians trynna spit. and this is better than I'ma say abou 70% of them. most of the time it's quality that shit's on them. but I can tell atleast have a decent Mic..that shit make the world of difference. I'd rather listen to someone with decent vocal quality spittin someone elses verses. then i would listenin to someone with horrible quality spittin hard ass original shit

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    im gonna have tha hardest shit im capable of right now (lyrically at least) comin after the summer and im leaving 2mrow outta town for a minute so no hate when the battle comes to a finish and well done 2 u

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    ay, back atcha pimp

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    i agree with Tucky ENT.. hes right on point.. good quality for sure.. and you got that unique voice homie.. keep it up
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    Default Re: Unconditional Love Verse

    preciate the love the voice is the thang im not too sure about cuz lyricaly and creative wise im str8

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    man after playing it after all this time the shit is completely wack and sloppy improved tracks on the way once i get back home!

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    Default Re: Unconditional Love Verse

    The quality is good. I think the only thing I can say you can do better is just pronunciate a bit clearer.
    I am no rapper so I can't say I give the best advice but I 'think' that'd help lol.

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    Default Re: Unconditional Love Verse

    im bout 2 upload anotha track now "Big Poppa" sounds fire 2 me

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