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    Default T'Spoon - Word To Ya Mother, Peace to Ya Bitches

    My name is Troy Spoon and i'm an upcoming rap artist. I recently realized the only thing I have an interest in is music. I have a plan set up and its just starting to kick off. Let me know what you guys think!

    The following are the first 3 tracks off of my mixtape. Enjoy!



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    Registered User JTeZee's Avatar
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    Default Re: T'Spoon - Word To Ya Mother, Peace to Ya Bitches

    swag. thought i was the only one who remixed that that bonefire beat.

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    could really use some opinions up in here!

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    Default Re: T'Spoon - Word To Ya Mother, Peace to Ya Bitches

    The motto is pretty dope!!! Just work on your delivery in my opinion. Keep it up!!!

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    listened to the motto... you need to ease up on the beat and ride it smoother.. delivery i agree needs work.. keep at it though

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    Default Re: T'Spoon - Word To Ya Mother, Peace to Ya Bitches

    Just listened to The Motto...your vocals are real clear and you're mostly on beat which is cool. I think you need to tighten up your lyrics up a bit and the flow as well. You have a little bit of charisma and mic presence but you should also work on that as well.

    Listening to "Inkredible" I really don't like this track. You def need some more work. The other track didn't play so I couldn't listen.

    Overall you can use some pointers before you really decide to take it serious bro.

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    I do like how ur vocals are clear, u need to work on delivery more and lyrics but ur def off to a good start. One tip if u really wanna do music as a living take some time and study other artists delivery, study their lyrics see how they switch up their flow on tha beat and such, also it wouldnt help to study music theory, either online or take a class the more u learn about structure or anything musically will help u in tha long run
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    Default Re: T'Spoon - Word To Ya Mother, Peace to Ya Bitches

    lyrical content needs to step up. the vocal sounds harsh in the top end fam
    you just need to mature as an artist but your on the right track sound wise. now just improve

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    flow is ok, constant but a bit flat. beat is alright tho -peace

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