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    I Am...Stephon Intense Hof's Avatar
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    http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page...?bandID=173818

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    Lyrically, your tops. Delivery needs some work, I can understand what your saying, but it just doesn't sound like it's riding the beat well. If you can work on delivery, you'll be top notch.

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    ur vocals are too loud at first

    your lyrics are nice and ur on point with tha beat but calm down a lil

    lol ur like me u have ur lil lines that u repeat

    "its a shame yall are on my cock yada yada" but i dont like dat line much hoff

    it wasnt' really much i can't give u no real feed acause its not much of a track but it aint wack

    its like 5 outta 10

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    cant believe i aint reply yet

    but chea, shits creative to me, i agree wit ef tho, vocals is a little loud, but u can work on that shit later....u got the lyrics, flow is off at times tho

    still, real creative to me

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    good beat 2 freestyle, ok...rhymez is good, got potential, need 2 up ya flow tho...i neva undastood how ef cud tell if sum one cud b readin off tha paper untill now..lmao..but yeah jus up the flow kid

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    haha thats a cool joint i like how you did that with the beat. weird theme toa song but you stuck with it, made it work. Yah flows off but good lyrics

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    ye i shoulda spit the written a couple more times before i recorded meh its whatever

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    funny ass intro...however not really sure i think ur holding back...but this isn't necessarily a beat that would bring it out of someone tho

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