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    Registered User emceeprototype's Avatar
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    Icon10 Take A Listen To a Verse I Wrote In 30 Mins

    nothing crazy jus a quick verse i wrote not the best thing i wrote but ehh its alright




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    YA GIRL NUFFIN LIKE MINE Young Ef's Avatar
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    Default Re: Take A Listen To a Verse I Wrote In 30 Mins

    not bad not bad you was going in then you stopped in then stopped second verse started hard ended weak while the first verse started weak ended stronger

    you need to give me a song a hook some bars for me to gage you but yeah i see why you at the bottom niggas hate on talent..good job

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    Default Re: Take A Listen To a Verse I Wrote In 30 Mins

    kinda reminds me of drake...idk, thats who jumps out...never knew u could rhyme something with aflac but u did...i thought it was cool..7/10
    Get out that box.

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