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    T.R. - Dreaming

    Only recording on my iPhone at the moment, but really just looking for some feedback. Instrumental is Oddissee - Beach Dr.


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    ok ok i see you.. beat is nice, and flow seems to be solid man.. im diggin this right here.. keep the gooodness coming
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    Prtty good delvery nice on beat but needs more energy and emotion on your voice very bland in vocal tone

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    You got dope flow and lyrics bro, all I can suggest is to maybe up the volume level of your vocals but if your recording on your iphone then that quality is to be expected. You would be on a mad game if you had a proper setup i.e. decent microphone to record and laptop with appropriate recording software, good effort though! keep doing ya thing, 1love -peace

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    previous comments are all on point...smooth vibe with the track, lyrics went to the beat...I would suggest a beat like this though just to fade it out toward the end and as you had the intro when you were talking about having dreams just do an outro as the beat fades...As per one of bars "got em where i want em when i speak"

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    Appreciate the feed.

    @robtress - digging that track, definitely had some good lines in there, right off the top that statue/catch you line was nice.

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    i like ya flow and lyrics fam everything sounds really good

    you just gotta get up in a booth and do this right but with watchu had to work with i gotta give it to you came out pretty decent stay up

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