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    Swisha Dutch R Goodie ?? #huah LimeLinx - Preview - Swisha,Dutch,r Goodie.mp3

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    I love this beat so it would be hard to screw it up haha but you did well on this. Decent flow n creative bars, I enjoyed it. 7/10

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    Khwameezy you know we go back...and I love to see you grow as an artist. It makes me proud to know that I gave you pointers way back and you followed them and got better because of it. Now on to the feedback

    Not your fault but I am growing SICK of this goddamn beat. Everybody and they momma wanna rap on this shit....correction...I'm beginning to think I'm the only one who hasnt spit over this beat. But your lyrics have certainly improved...as usual. Keep goin in that direction and you'll keep growing. Even dude on the second verse had some pretty decent lines. One thing you gotta do tho is work on how you say some of your lines. I'm not talking about your slang or how you talk but in this track in particular there was some parts that seemed almost mumbled or slurred. The hook especially....I didn't understand what the hook was saying until the end of the track. It might be the mixing or it could be the performance itself...just keep that in mind.

    Also I've said this before and I'll say it again. I understand if this is your lifestyle and whatnot....but PLEASE RAP ABOUT SOMETHING ELSE. LOL Que you like a lil homie to me so you know this is all love but the shit you rap about is the same shit EVERYONE AND THEY MOMMA RAPPIN ABOUT!!! Not sayin change your style or nothin...I just wanna hear something different from you. I'd like to hear more about Big Que than what you smoke or what burner you got on you and your in the hood. We know that by now. I'm not sayin drop that altogether....just try something else....somethin NOT cliche.

    Overall its an average track....nothing mind blowing or special. But your still growing and you have massive potential. I like that you keep comin with shit and keep doin ya thing. Don't stop. Just keep growin as an artist.

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    I was excited to hear that style but thought he made it work, very good.

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    Default Re: Swisha Dutch R Goodie ??

    LOL Thx fa all the feed @clinton Main reason we did it like this was becuz i couldnt find no other way to do this fuckin beat, shit is kinda hard on some shit lol , and as for what you sayin i under stand where you comming from i guess i gotta start postin them songs lol but overall people thanx for the feed keep em comming

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