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    Default Survivin Thru Rhymes

    This is my first fully done track as an artist.

    Let me know what you guys think..I'm new to this ish

    Rapped to survivin the times by nas



    Im still young/
    Im just survivin the times/
    but everybody's talkin bout techs and nines/
    our youth just wanna live a life of crime/
    if ya goto prison gotta wait in line/
    these criminal minds jus do their time/
    when they come out they barely gotta dime/
    life's passed by got a wife and a kid/
    barely noticed his son like a bitch in a wig/
    he thought to himself/
    why'd he kill a pig/
    he shoulda thought man/
    before he pulled the trig/
    never knew that he'd get/
    what he did/
    but can't go back he wished he was dead/
    now he's back on the street still/
    runnin from the feds/
    sellin to the fiends/
    just to get some bread/
    nikes on his feet and a hat on his head/
    but he's still havin trouble/
    sleepin in his bed/
    at night, he thinks about a dream/
    where he was a runnin back on the football team/
    his mom saw him play then her eyes would gleam/
    after the games they would get ice cream/
    but now he's 18 hit the hip hop scene/
    with nothin in his pockets but some lint and dream/
    then he told himself/
    I'm gonna be the best/
    no matter what it takes/
    I'm better than the rest/
    soon enough he had a chain/
    layin on his chest but his game fell off/
    and he turned to the mess/
    feared the street cuz its a game of chess/
    one false move/
    resulting in death/
    But now he's thirty five and he's barely alive/
    he's scrounging up quarters just to get a ride back to tre city/
    just to see his kid that he hadn't seen/
    in almost five years/
    he broke out in tears when his son was near/
    and at that moment/
    he lost all his fears.

    we're survivin/
    we're survivin the times now just kick back/
    and listen to my rhymes/

    we're survivin/
    we're survivin the times now just kick back/
    and listen to my rhymes/

    Now the man is fifty/
    his life was almost steady/
    met a nice girl and I think her name was jenny/
    He stopped drinkin henny and he saved every penny/
    didn't look back and he wasn't hesitatin/
    didn't give a fuck cuz he was acceleratin/
    at fast pace zoom! and his crown was awaitin/
    first he was a patient/
    now he's feelin flagrant/
    what he went through man anyone can make it/
    Couple years later he was rockin in a chair/
    with nothing on his head but some white and gray hair
    still had those dreams as his thoughts filled the air/
    sooner than he knew it he was cryin in despair/
    He scattered himself through the atmosphere/
    He saw it in the distance as his life appeared/
    and screamed what what the fuck/
    am i still doing here/
    as he woke up in bed and shedded a tear/
    Last edited by Hyphy; 28-10-2008 at 8:00 AM.

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    i'm feeling the words but re-up the track cuz its not loading.
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    i'm feeling the words but re-up the track cuz its not loading.
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