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    Normally u would catch me in the homebeats section but I got a nice flow this song wasnt nothin really cuz it wasnt nothin 2 focus on but DONT BE TRYIN 2 STEAL MAH LINESI done been throught issues wit dat already.This is a verse I did,I waz on it wit a few of mah ziggaz but im only gonna put my verse up,unfortunately the beat wasnt made by me this time it was made by UP06 he on hea,it had no topic so I was writtin and I had mad punchlines and I noticed towards the middle of da 16 and I was like fuCc it imma keep writtin punchlines,2 me the beat seemed like a club beat but I waznt in no club type mood feel me.Not the best quality but not bad jus needed sum more trebal but I aint no engineer,wait nah im about 2 be mah ziggaz makin a studio and they puttin me in charge cuz they dunno shyt about mastering so I get 2 play wit all da toys :D see wut grindin makin beats could get u lol so expect more from me!!! AIGHT NUFF BLABIN ON LISTEN!!!

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    that shit was hot homie, like them metaphores, didnt like the beat that much but shit was still sick
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    well i wont try to steal your lines seeing as tho at least three of them i have herd on other battle tracks famous and not famous thats how recycled they are...thats why i dont fuck wit punchlines..example you want..

    your bitch blowin on me like a nintendo cartridge...i herd lloyd banks say that cassidy and some unsigned -----s in a battle

    There was another one but i forgot..but that one stood out

    your flow is all pushed together u just trying to force it out doesn't seem to come naturally. Seems forced and like your out of your element. This is what u need to do, slow it down smooth out your wordz and find your flow within your voice and on top of the beat

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    well i wont try to steal your lines seeing as tho at least three of them i have herd on other battle tracks famous and not famous thats how recycled they are...thats why i dont fuck wit punchlines..example you want..

    your bitch blowin on me like a nintendo cartridge...i herd lloyd banks say that cassidy and some unsigned -----s in a battle

    There was another one but i forgot..but that one stood out

    your flow is all pushed together u just trying to force it out doesn't seem to come naturally. Seems forced and like your out of your element. This is what u need to do, slow it down smooth out your wordz and find your flow within your voice and on top of the beat

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    i aint even no u lived in CT like whats good witcha kin folk

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    Quote Originally Posted by Efdouble
    well i wont try to steal your lines seeing as tho at least three of them i have herd on other battle tracks famous and not famous thats how recycled they are...thats why i dont fuck wit punchlines..example you want..

    your bitch blowin on me like a nintendo cartridge...i herd lloyd banks say that cassidy and some unsigned -----s in a battle

    There was another one but i forgot..but that one stood out

    your flow is all pushed together u just trying to force it out doesn't seem to come naturally. Seems forced and like your out of your element. This is what u need to do, slow it down smooth out your wordz and find your flow within your voice and on top of the beat
    Oh word yea i cant get mad @ dat cuz i heard sum 1 say I go a lil 2 fast b-4,I dont listen 2 dem dudes no more,they 2 commercial now and them unsigned ziggaz i chilled listenin 2 dem 2 this dude mook battled serious jones and said the same EXACT shyt when he was battlin sum 1 else the whole crowd knew his lines,

    yea im from CT Dirty waters u kno waterbury gutta ville lol mah ziggas tired of goin from booth 2 booth n shyt so they gonna make they own,they need me 2 do the masterin and all dat I make da beats jus messin around wit FL i aint been really been givin nobody no fire 1's until i hear talk about more $$$ I wanna get into the real shyt u kno wit the mpc's keyboards,amps n all dat,im tryin 2 hit mah cuz team off right 2 its called CURSE they crew is like 20 deep its crazy i think its 2 many tryin 2 shine,and mah regular ziggas we tryin 2 get a website poppin and cake it off of beats and get on some,but other than dat shyt iz all gravy.

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    well you already know maybe we can all team up clickity klank is tha movement u only 45 minutes away we can do a track together its all love

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    Default Re: Some verse I did

    hate this beat

    as far as punchlines go u need to get more original, you're quality could use a lot of work

    your flow sounds weird i dunno somethin about it that i dont like, its real unnatural like you're rushing all the time or something try n smooth that out

    overall im not feeling this track no disrespect
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    lol dudes hatin on the beat haha, thats aiight. People wit ears will say different.
    It wasn't mastered at that point , when he did his verse it was there just so he could flow off of it. I don't understand what people are sayin that the flow sounds unnatural or w/e.??? Flow is straight to me.
    I'm from waterbury, CT too, me and All about money are friends. I know a few peeps down in Stamford too that I chill wit.
    Go to my myspace music page if you want the whole track wit me and my other boy he ain't on CP yet, along wit All about money. :thumbup: www.myspace.com/bjonesiumproductionz
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    dont make excuses for your beat, either its hot or its not, it sounds like you're jackin the south, leave it alone switch ya style up come with something original

    don't try n discredit my opinion like i don't have ears, u can ask most the regulars on this site that have heard my music, i have amazing beat selection skills, n that one doesn't sound hot
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    yeah dont make excuses just get better. And I no first hand your not going to appeal to everyone on CP everybody aint gonna like what your trying to do. Im From Stamford i rock wit New Haven And da dirty Water and i can tell you -----s hate but jus keep doin you

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    Quote Originally Posted by Efdouble
    yeah dont make excuses just get better. And I no first hand your not going to appeal to everyone on CP everybody aint gonna like what your trying to do. Im From Stamford i rock wit New Haven And da dirty Water and i can tell you -----s hate but jus keep doin you
    Lol at Hoffa Make excuses for what? Your beat selection is unpeckable huh? I could care less what the "regulars" say about you [no offense to those who feel it]. Jackin the South lol, where the f***is your brain at? How do you jack a certain style of beats every beat can be classified as East, West, South, Sampled, R&B or w/e, no matter who produced it. I guess everybody's jackin then. ??? Cool you hate the beat....
    I appreciate your "opinion" based off your current knowledge though.
    Get Hoffa your little soapbox pedestal.

    And Efdouble:

    Yeh i know madd ziggaz hate in CT, thats ok I could really care less. Usually the bystanders that talk more than they walk. I don't expect to appeal to everyone on CP. Everybody has different taste in music or w/e and i respect that. If you ain't feelin it, you ain't feelin it. Just the ones that swear that they spit the ultimate knowledge and have un-beatable, lol beat selection skills, they just talkin ignorant sh**.
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    lol at this dude aight, i guess u dj premier now or something stfu already duke ya beat wasn't hot simple n plain now im not gonna respond anymore cause i dont wanna wreck duke's thread
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    Quote Originally Posted by Hoffa
    lol at this dude aight, i guess u dj premier now or something stfu already duke ya beat wasn't hot simple n plain now im not gonna respond anymore cause i dont wanna wreck duke's thread

    EXACTLY cuz you ain't got sh** ta say Kid Rock. Wit your one soundclick song, talkin big, you don't know a got damn thing about music lol. If that was a South beat then you're black
    WTF is a BOOM BAP RECORDS. Sound like some comic book type sh**? Oh thats right your a Supervillian lol this kid haha.
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    Default Re: Some verse I did

    Quote Originally Posted by Hoffa
    dont make excuses for your beat, either its hot or its not, it sounds like you're jackin the south, leave it alone switch ya style up come with something original

    don't try n discredit my opinion like i don't have ears, u can ask most the regulars on this site that have heard my music, i have amazing beat selection skills, n that one doesn't sound hot
    lol it didnt seem like a south beat at all wow a synth sample i make w/e ziggaz wanna hear East to West it dont matter i think a good producer can make any kinda beat at ease,but yo i jus wanna hear somthin beat wise cuz u gettin on mah dude but ya soundclick lookin empty i kno u already came across the beats i made on sound click they old i aint post in a while but i still been workin mah ass off on the beats lately,and i aint mad about da feedbaCc u left me u bein honest,i jus wanna hear somthin,aight well this was supposed 2 be judgin on lyrics from the beginin but i dunno wut happend......
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