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    Default Re: so sincere freeverse

    LOL... this is just... i can't even say it... not good, i'm sorry man... i just don't dig it, quality wise, top notch, but ... what the hell were you thinking?

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    Hmmm.....I think you need to either add more syllables in your bars or learn to chop them....because when you drag your words...it takes away from any emotion u may have had behind them....i don't think this is one of ur better tracks...

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    damn the beat just came in like BAM....haha........talkin to computers ha ha i noticed that quick.......on my charles dickons ....hahaha.....this is pretty hot hof, loud as fuck but its cool.....quality is so so.......this for ur mixtape? sounds like it........blow up every beat...this is better than most of ur others.......but i noticed that on a lot of ur shit, u be tryna sound sophisticated, usin the big ass fancy words, it aint needed man, it ruins the rhymes and just fucks the flow up, seriously.......

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    Default Re: so sincere freeverse

    okay im going to keep it so real right now

    i listened to every last song on your page every single one and this is what it is

    you talk about me rapping tha same shit all tha time but all of your songs are about

    your shows
    how your the best
    rap sucks
    your tha last real emcee left and your lines will kill someone and ur tha best battle rapper thats all you talk about in your songs all of those songs are about that

    i can't remeber what one but one of those songs had a real hot beat i think it was last emcee alive that shit was tha hottest one to me because its a beat that fits your style more it drags just like u do your wordz..and you have this thing that you do where you just ride the beat with not type of intensity or energy u jus stick to da scrip of tha beat line snare line snare line snare trying really hard to stay on beat it doesn't seem like u switch ur flow or nothing to tha beat u jus dont that 1 2 1 2 1 2 basic i jus learned how to flow shit

    some of your shotters songs are better because most of tha time by tha second verse i get tierd of hearing tha shit and your voice is horrible im just being honest your quality is great very crisp at times but it is ovious u struggle saying certain stuff when u rhyme like one line u had

    "if your bitch is stupid yada yada yada fuck that somethin put my dick in your mouth" some shit like that you didn't say FUCK you said fux or something you didn't say that you say thas and u didn't say mouth u said mof something is up with tha way your words roll of your tounge sounds like at times u have alisp

    i dont no if u were just joking in the foxy brown thread but if you really have a hearing aid is that why you sound like that??

    sometimes i can hear u wit no problem and rock with what your saying then its your flow that gets to me cause its like u jus get on da beat and jus i dont no u jus dont get creative like ur lines u jus try to fit em all on tha beat without being off

    sometimes your smashin toooo much shit in and it sounds like ur slurring your words

    but you really shouldn't throw rocks if you live in a glass house cause you repeat yourself a lot

    i have herd you say "its a shame you are on my cock u no my name cause i got it locked" on like 3 songs that i no of and tha line isn't even good

    u talk about people bein on ur dick and how great u are and how much better u are then other people thats no different then me sayin tha same types of things in my songs but because u dont like my content its horrible when i do it

    im not gonna call u wack cause your not exactly full blown wack but your not all star hoffa ur not that great

    and as for ur song that may be dissing me whatever i dont give a fuck if it was if u dont got tha balls to say ef this is for u it doesn't matter

    i give that soundclick page a 6 work on saying your words and different flows

    u remind me of mike jones and even he switches up how he delivers his shit...other then that ur on ur way to being what u say u are in ur songs but until then ur jus getting started...peace

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    to be real all them shits arent serious i just find a verse i dont know wtf to do with n then throw it on a random beat n post it up....but na i wasnt dissin u in any of them really even ignorant originally that verse was for the collab that u asked about i didnt wanna waste the verse n u said some shit hinting that i was a dick rider so i posted it to hint about some stuff about u
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    Default Re: so sincere freeverse

    when are you going to record something that is serious? everytime someone says something about your music or something you say it wasn't serious it is starting to sound like u are jus saying that to take away from the fact that it wasn't a good effort

    so i wont peep nothing els unless u say okay this time im serious or this one i really tried cause what is tha point if ur not serious it makes u look bad

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    Default Re: so sincere freeverse

    that shits comin im just lazy with recording them
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    Default Re: so sincere freeverse

    well, okay but listen to me what im bout to say cause its real

    when i first started doing this back in 96 i started posting text rhymes online and people said maybe my shit would sound better in audio...but since i first started to rhyme i never recorded at this point so i was afraid but i knew it was a step i was not only ready to take but needed to take or i would more then likely still be a text emcee to this day

    so i took all my old rhymes just like your doing tha rhymes i had been writing years before i even knew about online posting and tha lil rhymes i would write at my desk in school call myself recording them. I was all over the beat i couldn't get the lines out the way i wanted them because they use to be really complex cause one thing i can say when ur in school and writing you tend to write about a lot of stuff u are learning i mean like revolotionary wars and shit all those big wordz u lose in english so my shit was a lot like yours with no real format and i neva had recorded so i had no idea who i was behind a mic or what i would actually sound like on a song

    when i first started to do it people would call me garbage a a b c rapper everything under the sun because they had no idea of the situation or even cared i was around seasoned vetz who had deals and did that so for me it didn't matter tha excuses

    i use to say tha same shit u say...this wasn't serious i freestyled this or i did it real quick i didn't sit down and take my time. It was all bullshit im not calling your a lier but what your doing is taking me back to these days..It was all lies what i was saying just saying it so people would give me a break and not call my music what it was and it was bad then

    instead of saying that shit i started working on it and trying to build. I took it one step at a time lyrics then style then flow then delivery then put it together and built my musical personality u lack all of this but u have tha lyrics and sometimes those are not as good as they look on paper...you got to remeber this is all about how it sounds coming out

    so just take this how u want but there is no loyality in music no more hoffa u got like one time to make some bullshit then nobody cares about u no more and u no that...so i hope this helps u in some way

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    Default Re: so sincere freeverse

    all i gotta say is that you sound like your reading your raps. you should really try to memorize before you rap ya shit.

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