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    Not the final mixdown... track from the upcomin tape... check it... dig it... luv it... share it... and of course... drop dem comments too doe...

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    This is pretty nice. Vocals could be louder. But your flow, delivery, lyrics, all good. You kinda remind me of Brother Ali a tiny bit, the way you say your words. Good track man, when's the tape comin out?

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    this shit goes.
    no doubt.
    best shit ive heard on here recently.
    swag ass voice n flow.

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    sounds good man, in the future i would cut away the free space at the end of the beat
    at 16, 21, 26, ... seconds theres some clipping sound in it, is that wanted? i dont like that much, i would take it out

    good luck 4 the future


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    I think the vocal level is just fine. The flow is dope. The pitch in your voice is dope, but maybe it should be a little deeper on this track, I'm not sure, it's hard to decide without hearing it that way. I like the vibe of this

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    You definetly have a lot of personality in a track man. Also have some really good lyrical ability on a track too, flow and delivery were on point as well. One of the more interesting unique tracks I've heard on any forum dude, keep at it. Good shit
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    Really good execution of lyrics. If you plan on releasing it professionally, get it mixed professionally.


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    woah, let it go! yes bruv, let it flow! fair play this is a beautiful smooth-ass beat, perfect for rollin' too which you did and you spittin' proper metaphors and deep bars while spittin' str8 fire with a heavy vocal presence. you definitely pulled the roof of this track off nicely. flow is mad constant & totally on-point. lyrics are sick as fcuk bruv, really vibing to this. loving it. keep doing ya thing fam, great track! -peace

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    Default Re: Pursuits of Clarity

    Nice... Feelin it. Lyrics droppin non stop str8 thru. Good story line.. Ty for sharing

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    The flow is amazing , out of the legends your flow reminds me a bit of DMX . Your lyrics are mad deep yo & so constant literal poetry in motion . The personality you put in spittin this verse made the lyrics stand out even more . The beat also complimented your lyrics , and nowadays alot of the times it's vice-versa . The mixing also seems to be going in a nice direction

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    Default Re: Pursuits of Clarity

    Hmm

    1. Very interesting flow and style...I love it!
    2. The beat is dope and the producer gets my props
    3. I agree with Tripcode that the vocals could be louder but you did say its not the final mix and that loudness is negligible by a few db
    4. It reminds me of a bust ryhmes track from back in the day. The only difference is there is no catchy hook which makes me a bit sad because lyrically you go
    5. I'm anticipating this one when its done fam

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    That beat is crack, and you spit some dope lines..the flow is wicked as well...the bass kinda reminds me of the Just like Music by E.Sermon..sick track

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    Dude this is dope, you fit on this beat like it was made for you (not sure if it was or not). This shit flows all the way through... your flow reminds me of a few dudes in the game combined in one, but truly your own. This is a track I could definitely cruise to.

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    Well done Plaqueman! This got to #3 in the August 2012 Tracks & Songs Charts.
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