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    Default Please check out my new song !

    Hey guys this is my first post on this website so hello , I'm a 16 year aspiring hip hop artist out of Conowingo, MD and I've been rapping seriously for around 5 or 6 months. All my links to my websites are on my profile and I'd appreciate it if you got connected with me. Here's my newest song , it's very short because I haven't put out a song in a while so I just dropped a little one verse remix to Macklemore's Can't Hold Us . Tell me what you think , Thanks & Enjoy !

    Download for the song: Can't Hold Us | Bandana Split
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    Nice bruv. You going good considering you've only been rapping 5 or 6 months, dope lyrics and sweet ass flow. Beat is pretty cool too. Overall good track -Keep on it fam -peace

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    Quote Originally Posted by Bilshot View Post
    Nice bruv. You going good considering you've only been rapping 5 or 6 months, dope lyrics and sweet ass flow. Beat is pretty cool too. Overall good track -Keep on it fam -peace
    Thanks man I appreciate it , it's nice to get serious feedback from other artists . so thank you yet again , awesome site
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    Default Re: Please check out my new song !

    Good quick rhyme cadence I liked the changed of the flow
    Very good rhyme schemes
    Great beyond your age
    Chorus is pretty good like the singing
    Need more verses really good song


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    Default Re: Please check out my new song !

    Quote Originally Posted by Jakob22Music View Post
    Good quick rhyme cadence I liked the changed of the flow
    Very good rhyme schemes
    Great beyond your age
    Chorus is pretty good like the singing
    Need more verses really good song


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    thanks man , I really appreciate that . & as for the length , I told my "fans" I was taking a break for a little to get better and that was just a little something to show my improvement , but I appreciate the compliments man it does wonders for my confidence
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    sick shit man. your flow is awesome. it's pretty unique too. Some parts reminded me of Lil Wayne a bit, but other than that it was good. But try layering your voice, at least on parts, becuase it sounds good, but on a beat like this you need to sound more... I don't know, more pronounced. Like you need to have more of a presence. But other than that I'd give it a 9 out of 10.
    Keep up the good work man. I gotta say though, I've been rapping for a year, and you've been rapping for 6 months. You sound way better than I do. I want to see what you're like 6 months from now. You could be the next one to make it, dude. Keep up the great work. ~Abductee

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    Quote Originally Posted by Abductee View Post
    sick shit man. your flow is awesome. it's pretty unique too. Some parts reminded me of Lil Wayne a bit, but other than that it was good. But try layering your voice, at least on parts, becuase it sounds good, but on a beat like this you need to sound more... I don't know, more pronounced. Like you need to have more of a presence. But other than that I'd give it a 9 out of 10.
    Keep up the good work man. I gotta say though, I've been rapping for a year, and you've been rapping for 6 months. You sound way better than I do. I want to see what you're like 6 months from now. You could be the next one to make it, dude. Keep up the great work. ~Abductee
    thanks man I'm glad you liked it , and yeah I know what you mean about the vocal stacking , I just don't have that good of equipment and i suck at mixing so I don't mess with it . but i appreciate your comments and I look forward to talking again in the future , stay in touch !
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    Default Re: Please check out my new song !

    5-6 month is a very short period for music artist but you have good skills. Keep it up!

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    This definitely makes me want to hear more of your music and see what else you have.
    You deserve to be given a shot in the game fam from what I hear.
    Very unique flow, and vocals.
    The beat was very original as well, and well put together.
    You have that flow that has definitely gotten alot of producers foot in the door.

    Keep pushing forward, and keep working on progression.
    Practice makes perfect so make as much music as you can.
    Holla at me if you need help with anything what so ever, I'm officially a fan.

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