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    Default Peep theese Two. Tell me im weak.

    did it work?

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    its dope man!

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    Default Re: Peep theese Two. Tell me im weak.

    thanks g.tell your friends.aha
    and shoot me beats if you got emmmm

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    Default Re: Peep theese Two. Tell me im weak.

    its dope...a lil too much M though...kinda reminds me of the pharcyde too.beats dope. 8
    Get out that box.

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    Default Re: Peep theese Two. Tell me im weak.

    Can't say I'm feeling either of them. Beats are nice

    My personal issue really is your voice, it may be your voice itself or your delivery just doesn't match your tone of voice that it just doesn't make you sound very memorable to me. Flow was decent, rhymes were decent, wasn't hot, wasn't shitty. Lots of room for improvement. If I could give one compliment it would be your flow at 1:17 on Fuck A Burger, it hit me with a Mos Def feel and was just about the only time you got me bobbin my head which was unfortunately for a shot period of time but I thought that little segment was real good.

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    Default Re: Peep theese Two. Tell me im weak.

    Fuck A Burger
    Beat comes in really
    Vocals to loud on the mix don't like vocal tone to nasally remind me of old eminem pretty good flow and rhyme schemes some lower end bass in the vocals maybe double the layers

    Young life
    Didn't like the beat seemed to many mixes of styles but not really going anywhere need a better beat

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    Default Re: Peep theese Two. Tell me im weak.

    turn ure vocals down and add some layers. first beat reminds me a lot of a Wu style beat. the second...........fuck it. i dont know.

    but gotta show love to ya all the way from Ohio. Much love to palmdale, lancaster quartzhill and little rock!

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    Default Re: Peep theese Two. Tell me im weak.

    what you meeean you dont know?
    thanks tho g.


    PKAAAAAA!!!

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    fuck a burger - i like the beat bro, rhymes/ flow is nice bro, really nice track reminds of some old school rap, only thing i gotta say is the mix is off bro, your vocals are way to loud, the beat is also a bit loud and can clash at points, nice track just work on overall mix bro!! good work though

    the young life - i gotta agree with the dude saying the beat seemed to many mixes of styles, im not a big fan of the sounds used, and the drums, again the over all mix with vocals and beats is a bit weak, 1min 40 secs in there seems to be too much going on its kinda all over the place

    I am not faulting your flow or delivery of verses you have a good talents, just need to work on beat choice, and the mixs,

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    Default Re: Peep theese Two. Tell me im weak.

    Palmer Squares much ? hahaha
    Follow me @BandanaSplit

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    Default Re: Peep theese Two. Tell me im weak.

    I pretty much agree with the other guys. your flow is nice, the beats are sick, but it needs to be mixed a bit better than it is. but you could do great things given you're ready to put in a little work. My adviec would be try and get soemone to master your tracks, or get a multi track recording program (Like Audacity) where you can control the volumes of both tracks. Anyway, keep up the pace, and you'll be getting noticed big-time.
    ~Abductee

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    Default Re: Peep theese Two. Tell me im weak.

    Not bad at all....Dont let the haters judge your production.....You are kind of replicating that 1998 Eminem sound....and I for one am not a big eminem fan, but there sure are a lot of people that are.....Your flow sounds relaxed and if anything, sounds different than typical shit you hear on the reg....Im tired of the hiphop heads on here that dont accept anything unless it sounds like artists we've already heard. I give you points for the originality....Dont get sucked into that Eminem sound though....make your own sound....Ive mentioned Danny Brown before, but he to me is bringing his own style to the table and its noticable...Big ups man

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    Default Re: Peep theese Two. Tell me im weak.

    Shit is like a freaky twist of Eminem, & Wu Tang, with a sprinkle of Method and Red lol... You need alot of work fam, a whole lot of work. lol

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    Default Re: Peep theese Two. Tell me im weak.

    peep the newer threads g..
    ayy and ive never heard of palmer squares so i looked him up and hes pretty raw.

    once i get more talent points i got some new shizz for yall toooooo.
    P.S basedgod really did fuck my bitch. lol

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    Default Re: Peep theese Two. Tell me im weak.

    I think you might have recorded too hot on the first track, too close to the mic maybe. Some parts the flow/delivery is a little off. However I like the voice, think it can work well for rap and the song isn't bad. The beat kind of irritates me, but these type of beats usually do

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