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    Default Re: "Occupy" - 99-1

    backin track needs to be brought out more, some lyrics could be tighter
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    Default Re: "Occupy" - 99-1

    Thanks for the feed...sad thats its hard to come by here
    Last edited by ninety9one; 20-03-2012 at 3:40 PM. Reason: type-o

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    Default Re: "Occupy" - 99-1

    beat is on point... i agree with him ^ tighten up the lyrics a bit... keep grindin....

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    I agree wiv bronson ^^^^ tha beat is dope but your lyrics are slacking and delivery is muffled by the microphone quality or software effect? not sure what mic or software your using but turn it off whatever it is and tighten up, try speak more clear on the mic -peace

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    Default Re: "Occupy" - 99-1

    i have to agree with all above, also articulate more

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    Default Re: "Occupy" - 99-1

    enunciate.

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    Default Re: "Occupy" - 99-1

    nice intro...the constitution with the strings is a nice build up....i like that u are talking about something with merit....the break (bridge i guess) was nicely placed...the thing i dont like personally is the mix with ur voice..what i mean is ur flow is good, the beat is nuts but they dont match...the beat isnt reflecting ur rhythm.does that make sense? 7/10
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    Quote Originally Posted by Rizzo Rapz View Post
    what i mean is ur flow is good, the beat is nuts but they dont match...the beat isnt reflecting ur rhythm.does that make sense?
    you mean my my flow and the beat arnt meshing well

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    Default Re: "Occupy" - 99-1

    exactly...but thats my humble opinion..i think with a..."definitive" kick in there going with ur semi staccato (im sure there a word) delivery it would blend better but then again thats how I make beats.
    Get out that box.

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    Default Re: "Occupy" - 99-1

    Quote Originally Posted by Rizzo Rapz View Post
    exactly...but thats my humble opinion..i think with a..."definitive" kick in there going with ur semi staccato (im sure there a word) delivery it would blend better but then again thats how I make beats.
    thanks you gave the best feed as of yet... i listened to thinkin what ya said and could hear what you were talking about ... ill keep that in mind in the future and be sure to meesage me or something when you post stuff ... good lookin out

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    I like the beat. I think it could use a stronger kick, but the instrumentation is on point. I really like the lyrics, too. But I gotta agree with some of the above that you could clear up the delivery a little bit. Keep going, tho. You're headed the right way.

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    Default Re: "Occupy" - 99-1

    this shit is dope!!! its talking about the silent majority as opposed to the apathetic mass of people....the 1percent that run shit...this goes right with my song run nigga run...i know i already commented but this shit is intelligent.
    Last edited by Rizzo Rapz; 26-03-2012 at 9:07 PM.
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    Default Re: "Occupy" - 99-1

    Great that you decided to do a song about something thats an issue in society rather something that can be a problem in society.

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