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    Ay... this is an older track... not one of my better ones. I lace the first two verses and a buddy does the third. My delivery is soft, and I cant do choruses, so besides that lace me some constructive criticism and keep the hate to yaself.

    Never released it publically or anythin

    personally, i didnt mind the chorus. I think I feel off in the middle-end of the second verse. And the topic's kinda lame.

    Burton ft Lucky Wun - No Enemies.mp3 - 5.46MB

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    hey black,
    nice track, the intro thru me off a bit with the flyin pan n annacaluton.
    liked the chorus myself,
    the reason ur not getting many feeds is zshare,
    next time u should up it on somthin streaming, soundclik etc..
    otherwise good effort,

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    thnaks alot homie. Yea the intro throws every off... I ersonally like the intro idea - its a bit unusally... i had to kill the time before the track started and the fading panning chrous worked perfectly IMO. I didnt want to release it on soundclick because they it would be public and I didnt feel it was one of my better tracks to release but I will consider that next time.

    BTW zshare does stream it for me. thanks for the reply.

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    nice flow....like ya flow ya lyrical capabily beats tuff,,, basically the only problem i got wit you is ya voice....you overpronounce ya words....the great thing about rappin is you don't have to pronounce every letter in every word ya digg lol but i like ya shit ma manz

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    iight check it..the beat is wack straight up sounded like you was about to go treasure hunting..lyrics was decent..flow was on point but it gets boring..like younghetto said you overpronounce ya words..sounds like you reading from the pad..try to throw some slang into ya words nah mean.
    Last edited by DC Entel; 16-09-2007 at 8:33 AM.

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    basically the only problem i got wit you is ya voice
    good looks, ii feel ya. Im always tryin tell me boy to dumb up the vocals (he took the third verse) and I never really realised i wasnt doing it myself. I consider that.

    flow was on point but it gets boring
    thats probably the lack of style... i didnt switch it up to much and play with it enough.

    Thanks for the critcism and comments, appreciate.

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    flow is on point, beat is alright sounds like some knock dre ish though, lyrically its alright

    you're voice needs work though, and your delivery annoys me a little

    hook is cool
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    Quote Originally Posted by Hof View Post
    flow is on point,
    you're voice needs work though, hook is cool
    the beat election fit the track i liked everything but your voice does need work,
    but that can be fixed, i'mma rate this 8.5

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    uppin... appreciate all the constructive.

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    I like it you just need some FX on the chorus to distinct the switch cuz without it, it sounds like you recorded it all in one take.... but lyric's are on point

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    Quote Originally Posted by blacklabel View Post
    Ay... this is an older track... not one of my better ones. I lace the first two verses and a buddy does the third. My delivery is soft, and I cant do choruses, so besides that lace me some constructive criticism and keep the hate to yaself.

    Never released it publically or anythin

    personally, i didnt mind the chorus. I think I feel off in the middle-end of the second verse. And the topic's kinda lame.

    Burton ft Lucky Wun - No Enemies.mp3 - 5.46MB
    to tell ya the truth homeboy
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    i liked the beat
    the lyrics
    plus the chorus
    so keep doing ya thang fashizzo
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    oh yeah
    i forgot to say
    i like the way ya'll both switched up for parts of the chorus
    that was a nice lil accent
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    appreciate all the input. bumpin for a few more

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