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Thread: Ninety9One - Super duper HIP-HOP let's make a baby music contest/competition 2012

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    Default Ninety9One - Super duper HIP-HOP let's make a baby music contest/competition 2012

    this for RayTheCoolestLosers contest leave some feed

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    Default Re: Ninety9One - Super duper HIP-HOP let's make a baby music contest/competition 2012

    okay, I love the beat its sick tbh your flow could better as in more clear, but apart from that lyrics are ok but can't make out the concept which I assume is 'addicted to skateboarding,' not sure what it is but this track just seems to be overly humorous and like a kind of rap spoof or something, don't know what you were aiming for, but its ok for what it is -peace

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    Default Re: Ninety9One - Super duper HIP-HOP let's make a baby music contest/competition 2012

    I think it could be improved to be honest, from the concept, flow, lyrical content as Bilshot said. I think a much stronger attempt would be needed to win a RTCL competition... but good luck I guess

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    Default Re: Ninety9One - Super duper HIP-HOP let's make a baby music contest/competition 2012

    thanks for the feed...@bilshot the video has nothing to with the content of the song i just wanted to add a video with

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    Default Re: Ninety9One - Super duper HIP-HOP let's make a baby music contest/competition 2012

    I like the video editing with better camera and lighting would look great

    Flow is really basic cadence like in the 80's on each beat But you were on beat so the rhythm is there. Lyrically it' was pretty good with lines.
    Need to really work on the delivery to smooth out the flow and would be pretty good

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