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    Registered User ninety9one's Avatar
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    Default Ninety9One - Here For You

    This song is for my friend who is addicted to pills thought id share... btw peeps always comment on the beats the beat isnt mine its allarounda anywho hope you enjoy

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    your intention is sweet, concept is thoughtful.. but wow, its unbelievable how out of beat you are in the 1st verse, you need to practice up your timing skills bro. Dunno whats going on cuz your more in-beat in the 2nd but then loose it again in the 3rd, baffles me lol unless your intentionally sounding that way. Just sounds like your reading from paper and alot of your bars are being forced. The beat is wkd though, loving the production, just think the flow & lyrics could be a whole lot better, more expression and on point flows if ya get me -peace

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    WOW actual feedback thanls I just listened to it with what you said in mind and to be honest there were spots in the first verse i wasnt sure about ... thats what happens when i have to stop writing and comeback sometime later hard to find "that" flow i had but ill keep in mind what ya said in the future... good lookin out thanks

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    Yeah I get the same thing, have to be 'in the zone' to rap a track up, usually when I leave a song then go back to finish it off things dont work out lol no worriez. was a good track nonetheless -peace

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    nice laid back beat...i must agree u do go off beat a little but that could be latency or something, just gently slide the wave into place...nice concept, Addiction is a bitch!! we all go through some type of vices..i hope ur boy is doing ok and this song motivates him to do better. 7
    Get out that box.

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    Cool that you made this for your boy, but work on your flow. And it sounds like you are reading off paper, thats not something you want the listener to think.
    Make sure you check out the rapper that I manage, Infinite Stylez:

    http://www.youtube.com/user/InfiniteStylez

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