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    Registered User ninety9one's Avatar
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    Icon10 Ninety9One - Fly Away ... lil 16

    just a lil 16 i did

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    Default Re: Ninety9One - Fly Away ... lil 16

    study yooo verse g!
    spit that shit wit no paper.
    it'll sound smoother cuzzo you can tell you was reading not rappin.
    all love thoo mayne. digest the feed back.

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    Default Re: Ninety9One - Fly Away ... lil 16

    ^^^^WHAT HE SAID!.....AND ALSO NEEDS MO9RE ENTHUSIASM BEHIND IT TOO...KEEP WORKIN MANE...

    PEEP MY JOINT....
    http://www.crazypellas.net/artist-au...-boogie-67558/

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    Default Re: Ninety9One - Fly Away ... lil 16

    Nice beat choice to do a nice flow to nice chorus
    Recording could be allot better
    no energy in vocal tones you sound bored in spitting it
    Delivery is a bit old school and flow
    Lyrics pretty good match the vibe

    Please check my video

    http://www.crazypellas.net/artist-au...03/#post378895

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    Default Re: Ninety9One - Fly Away ... lil 16

    Your lyrics aren't that bad, But the delivery personally ruins it. There's no emotion it it man. In order for people to feel you, you have to have your Delivery match your lyrics dude. You won't be able to reach your full potential unless you do that. I do like your choice of beat, it works. Keep at it

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