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    Icon10 Ninety9One - "Change of Heart"

    A song for every ex...mixed and mastered by my boy OZ

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    Default Re: Ninety9One - "Change of Heart"

    At the beginning of the first verse it is very hard to understand you, but as the song goes on you pick up the volume. To me there is way too much cussing in here to do anything major. When you are making a song you have to look at the major issues at hand. If you plan on doing big things with a song it all rides on how you write it.

    Keep doing your thing because your quality and talent is present. I would just roll over what I said before and tell you, try to use no more than 1 - 2 cuss words in a verse and NO cuss words at all in the hook if you plan on doing serious things. This song only shows me that you are not on the right level yet artist wise.

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    the beat is kinda nice, i gotta agree with the other dude, the cussing in the track is beyond a joke, its basically like 90% swear words, if you look at mainstream or what people are listening to then you would see that it aint what people wanna hear, if you chose other words for the track this could be a nice track,

    also the mix of the vocals and the beat is a bit poor at points the vocals are too quiet and hard to make out,

    not feeling it bro, but thats cause i dont think ya need to be swearing every line to make a hit song

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    Default Re: Ninety9One - "Change of Heart"

    noted and i have made big strides esp witn the f word it used to be my fall back word to fill time but the cussng is intentional i wanted it to be revolting because at the time of writing thats how i felt owards women revolted and disgusted... but what yall said is true and ill keep that in mind in the future

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    Default Re: Ninety9One - "Change of Heart"

    ok...

    1. The mix is horrible fam.
    2. The flow is off beat in some places which doesn't look good for an MC
    3. The song is dope though and the feeling is there which is what matters
    4. I like the effect on the hook and would suggest panning it and even adding a phaser to make it more interesting and give it some movement
    5. Overall the concept gets a +4 but the quality gets a -4 fam

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    Default Re: Ninety9One - "Change of Heart"

    Quote Originally Posted by illsoulprod View Post
    ok...

    1. The mix is horrible fam.
    2. The flow is off beat in some places which doesn't look good for an MC
    3. The song is dope though and the feeling is there which is what matters
    4. I like the effect on the hook and would suggest panning it and even adding a phaser to make it more interesting and give it some movement
    5. Overall the concept gets a +4 but the quality gets a -4 fam
    Now this is FEEDBACK... thanks for the honesty and tips i did the hook myself and was trying to get the panning right but it felt like not enough or way to much but ill mess around with a phaser and see what pops

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    Default Re: Ninety9One - "Change of Heart"

    Nice! A bit too much swearing going on, but really considering the concept it don't matter too much, although they are the only words that really stand out to me lol as it seems the vocals seem too quiet over the beat. From what I hear, it's a dope beat, has got real funky slightly 'sketchy' sound to it. I like your flow and vibe throughout, seems real constant and conveying a message. Feeling the chorus, just wish the vocals were slightly leveled out louder than the beat as it kinda drowns out your vocals in the first couple of verses/choruses, picks up then drowns out again, literally your presence seems almost epic and the song sounds like pure dopeness, just try level out the volume levels or sumin tho yeah, but 4real I'd buy this record if the sound levels was fixed -7/10 -peace

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