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    Icon4 My song "If The World Stood Burning"

    Hello,
    I'd just like to share one of my newer songs, entitled "If The World Stood Burning", which features rapping by Pakkun Purgatory and singing by myself, and will be going on my new EP or album. Any feedback would be great. Thank you.

    Mastered version (better sound quality if you download the MP3):


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    YA GIRL NUFFIN LIKE MINE Young Ef's Avatar
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    Default Re: My song "If The World Stood Burning"

    fix your link or im deleting your thread

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    Default Re: My song "If The World Stood Burning"

    Pros- The instrumenal is fitting and sounds good obvilosly you know you got a voice and your lyrics are good Cons- i think the lead in may be to long with out any thing and in the ebat theres a 2 and 3 step beeping it there the first time you said if the world stood burning kinda overpowers everything else and the mix on the vocals for the rapping sound like someone put megaphone or telephone effect on it ... but if you cleared up the rapping this would be a banger... dope track hope to see more

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    Default Re: My song "If The World Stood Burning"

    it was cool till the rapping started...it aint SEEM to have any cadence, no direction...sounded like someone just read off the paper and ignored the punctuation.5/10
    Get out that box.

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