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    Ok Now This a quicky i did it while pops went to store cause i need to record when hes gone and plus air conditioning was on but i think is kooo feedback is apreciated and i know i slurr in some woords but im planning to re reocrd soon i was thinking saturday but i have to go to my cus QUINCE but yee im out
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    Default Re: Music (dont come down) Ruff Draft

    quality isnt too good, but i hear the conditions.. i couldnt understand what you were saying most of the time. u need to run them vocals through some gates or sumthin, just sounded muddy, wasnt clear.

    you flow with passion at least, good energy.. repost it when u re record it

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    yo Thanx Ineed to do it like echoish and alot bass so the air condtition eont be heard and i wrote it in like 20 mins and recorded it in like 10 sp over all 30 mins or so but thanx i will plus i sound like was sick and atleast some pople uderstand what im saying cause here in the bay is all going stupid shit ehh i hate it but thanx for feed and i will upload it after i re record it

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    I fix It a little flat my vocals it wont sound to muddy but i dont see to much of a diffrence hopefully you could understand a little beter

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    I recorded it Agin today i upladed it alredy 2 Please leave some feedback i want to improve thanx yall

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    u have decent energy but ur flow fell of too many times. just rehearse a bit more before u record

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    Al Right Man Thanx For Feed Back

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    its nice man, but your off beat a few times, ryming too fast to try and catch the beat in the first verse . but your lyrics is nice son, and it sounds a lil sluurred but it sounds cleaner than than the first time round. Keep doin what you doin ecko, flow like you did on the second verse all through the song and it would sound alot better but its still a nice drop. peace, 1
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    yee thatnx and the fast part i did it on purpose i m learning sylables flip some shit called like that but yee thats y i said draft but feed always feeds me to work alot hard thanx Peace

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    dawg buy a condesner mic, and youll be straight, fuck what people saying about being slurred (i got a double broken jaw,, well 3 years healed) and I rap and sound like well, the best

    anyways, I liked your drop man, had energy, you got a unique flow, I say holla at me man, I can help you improve, and I got the connects


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    thanx man i got a condenser mic lol but got lazy didnt want o fix mixer lus i was on a ruch pops cant accept the fact that i like tp rap he saiys rapping aint for ebaners lol and thanx for feed

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    Default Re: Music (dont come down) Ruff Draft

    So Far im lovin that sample

    Oh god your voice is so not ment for rap...you can't flow and your voice is just not built for rap...possibly a producer or ghost writer if u made this beat

    This beat is crazy...tha flow sounds like u wrote this and decided you would attempt to rap im not feeling tha rap part at all...i continue to listen becauisue this beat continues to impress me

    When that guitar synth came in it was crazy...im honestly not even listening to you anymore...your boring and tha lyrics stink and your voice isn't exactly my cup of tea do you want some helpful advice?

    Please stop reading off of the paper, write your rhymes understanding how u want them to sound and spit em wit tha same passion u wrote em with then your songs will be so much more better enjoyable and listenable but hot ass beat non tha less

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    ef dub thanx for feed and i like it when peeps or honest but i cant change the way i sound no i didnt make beat umm is called dont come down and is from obie trice but yea thanx for feed

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    Default Re: Music (dont come down) Ruff Draft

    It's okay. I think you need to work on your voice. I also think you need to find an identity. But other than that it is pretty straight.

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