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    Default Moving On

    MySpace.com - Big Que - NEW ORLEANS, Louisiana - www.myspace.com/khwamezzy


    Check it out also the Lolli pop remix oh and add me my old page got deleted

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    YA GIRL NUFFIN LIKE MINE Young Ef's Avatar
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    i herd this shit....

    this one is decent your flow is getting better that is da biggest thing with you your flow and tha way you say words you do not speak too clearly all tha time but i will admit tha fact that this is one of tha best efforts from u and i guess its good that i can say that with every new song from u i listen too

    your lyrics dont make sense a lot of tha time but at least u stayed on beat and ur adlibs was aii peace out

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    Umm thanx i fell so good ma thanx again any more rates

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    Eh...the Moving On track is okay I guess...but there are obvious flaws.
    It seems like you're really trying to say things in your lyrics...but you're not delivering them very well...swagless almost. It sounds like you're just reciting lines from a piece of paper and nothing else...you should try to put some more emotion in your voice. Even your adlibs are lagging.
    Quality is something else...I'm sure you've heard before that your quality isn't very good...and that'll be an easy fix once you get a better microphone.

    The continuity and fluidity of your flow was pretty good though...you rode the beat pretty nicely and didn't really seem to fall off too much. And like I said, your lyrics are okay...but I'm sure they'd sound a little better if you actually put swag behind them.

    There are things you need to work on...but this was still an okay track though.

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    see right there is a rate thanx man i get wat you said man and everythingthanx for showing some love

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    classic beat..mic qaulity needs work..delivery is cool..kinda rushed..lyrics are ok..sounds kinda amature..flowo ff at points..ernie n bert line was funny..sounds more like a freestyle..just keep grindin practice makes perfect

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