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    PLEASE LET ME KNOW WHAT YOU THINK! THANK YOU
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    Default Re: (MOMENT FOR LIFE VIDEO) I want to Improve- FEEDBACK PLEASE

    I think the lighting could be better in the video, but you killed this track man, you intro was real dope. towards the middle it almost sounded like you were loosing breath, but other than that very solid remix man.
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    Default Re: (MOMENT FOR LIFE VIDEO) I want to Improve- FEEDBACK PLEASE

    appreciate it man. and yea i was running out of breath lol..but in emotional tracks i personally dont mind keeping it like that instead of punching in....it makes it less systematic i think. But appreciate the critique too!..next time ill try to make it sound more controlled!

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    Default Re: (MOMENT FOR LIFE VIDEO) I want to Improve- FEEDBACK PLEASE

    Fam I think you have alot of talent.
    The title says that you are trying to improve.
    I will tell you one thing.
    Lay off of the straight rapping through.
    Get yourself some hooks out there.
    Use some original beats.
    I would definitely suggest those two things.
    Rapping like you do you can make major things happen.
    You have to bottle that energy up and control it though.
    Put yourself in a position you are not used to.

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    Default Re: (MOMENT FOR LIFE VIDEO) I want to Improve- FEEDBACK PLEASE

    appreciate it! And i do have a lot of actual "Full Songs" just didnt want to release them without the right promo and stuff so they can get some attention, and voice control is something iv'e worked on a lot along with pure lyrcism. Appreciate the critiques though bro! im always looking to improve.

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    Sick bars, dope flow & delivery, you went in hard bruv! respect! Str8 spitting fire there 4 real, only downside is the lack of chorus/hook just like DirtyScope said, if you had a hook it would of made the world of difference, and given break-ups from you mad flow, cuz tbh its no wonder your out of breathe lol ya need to pace yourself with a hook inbetween spitting like that fam, anyway, big ups! sick track -safe

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    Default Re: (MOMENT FOR LIFE VIDEO) I want to Improve- FEEDBACK PLEASE

    Well done NovacaineBreeze! This got to #5 in the November 2012 Tracks & Songs Charts.
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    Default Re: (MOMENT FOR LIFE VIDEO) I want to Improve- FEEDBACK PLEASE

    I felt you copied the original track a bit to much But the talent is there delivery is crazy and very clear vocal talent.
    Liked the content some clever lines great track Going to post this on my blog

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    Default Re: (MOMENT FOR LIFE VIDEO) I want to Improve- FEEDBACK PLEASE

    I felt you copied the original track a bit to much But the talent is there delivery is crazy and very clear vocal talent.
    Liked the content some clever lines great track Going to post this on my blog

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    Death Chamberz Music : Moment For Life @Novacainebreeze

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    Default Re: (MOMENT FOR LIFE VIDEO) I want to Improve- FEEDBACK PLEASE

    Well done NovacaineBreeze! This climbed to #3 in the December 2012 Tracks & Songs Charts.
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    Default Re: (MOMENT FOR LIFE VIDEO) I want to Improve- FEEDBACK PLEASE

    yo this shit pretty tough songs ill video could and should be better only cuz this track 2 tough to not make it perfect keep rippin shit

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    Default Re: (MOMENT FOR LIFE VIDEO) I want to Improve- FEEDBACK PLEASE

    I dont mind the str8 rapping you deliver. its got that underground feel to it which i can feel and love more than the bullshit put out today. you go hard on the delivery and i appreciate that shit a lot. my only complaint was you sounded way louder than the beat but that might just be my speakers.

    nice work homie

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    Default Re: (MOMENT FOR LIFE VIDEO) I want to Improve- FEEDBACK PLEASE

    I APPRECIATE ALL OF THE LOVE! And i promise i have a lot of real music with hooks coming soon..i didnt mean to reply..just been busy..but #ONE LOVE

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