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    Default Lway- The Food (Will RTF)

    What's Good Guys. I'm new to this site if you don't know. My name is Lway, and This is a song off of my Mixtape "Don't Judge Me Yet". It's called "The Food". The original beat is by Kanye West and Common. So check it out, enjoy, and hope you like


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    Sounds good. You might add a little more to the instrumental. Thats just what I think. If you want more good clean acapellas go to my blog in my signature. I've got over 100 good pellas.

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    Some lines seemed just very slightly slurred and or rushed, not much but just enough to be noticeable. So just work on that. You got a good voice, just keep working on getting the flow on point, almost there

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    i agree with woods a few parts did sound a bit rushed might need to work on that but i like the concept good hiphop what the game needs keep pushin`

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    Default Re: Lway- The Food (Will RTF)

    SOUND LIKE YOU WAS FORCING THE FLOW MANE.....WHEN YOU LISTENED TO THIS TRACK...WHERE YOU 100 PERCENT HAPPY WITH THE FINISHED PRODUCT THAT CAME OUT YOUR SPEAKERS?....NOW COMPARED TO OTHERS...MATTER FACT THE FOLKS WHO INSPIRED YOU TO SPIT....DID IT MATCH UP TO THE WAY THEY CAME OFF ON THE TRACK?....

    PEEP MY JOINT AND LEAVE FEEDBACK...
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    Yea I feel like you stumbled and rush though the track you could've took your time and flowed with track instead of force yourself on the track.
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    Default Re: Lway- The Food (Will RTF)

    In my opinion overall not so bad . But i agree with the comments posted here , you should try working on your articulation and delievery and practice riding the beat smoothly.. keep doing your thing

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    I agree with some of the above comments, some parts seem rushed but it's a dope track overall!

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    Default Re: Lway- The Food (Will RTF)

    I love this beat, rapped this shiz up when I was 15. Nice flow, lyrics and rhythm on-point. Some bars seem a little too emphasized but kinda works in parts of the track, other parts sounds a little out of time. but good effort -peace

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