Results 1 to 10 of 10

Thread: Life Story

  1. #1
    Elite Artist
    Artist of the Year
    skillfulgil's Avatar
    Join Date
    16 Sep 2008
    Location
    Shhhhhhhhh. You Already Know
    Posts
    682

    Default Life Story

    Now U guys know I do this 4 fun! And again I'm flattered by U's letting me post and shit! So Just bug out. Drop feed if U wanna. But do listen. Thanks Again.

    "Life Story"
    Jumped out the cu__ with da umbilical wrapped around the wrist
    like a MIC chord,
    raised within' da walls of a child psyche ward,
    Poppin' lil nig__ with a pencil in their eyeball, its a dog eat dog world
    so I guess it's my call,
    Left da premises when they thought I was old enough,
    had 2 act innocent when I was really cold & ruff,
    Shopliftin' nig__ was the best in foldin' stuff,
    made a livin' but this petty shit 4 me wasn't enough,
    Set my sight on the spot just down da block,
    watched their every move as though I was a cop,
    Saw the ni___ with the package makin' his drop,
    waited till he left with the money and "POP POP POP!"
    Bagged my own shit up and called it "LA TUNA"
    1977 with my fly ass Pumas,
    Bought all da neighborhood kids a bar of Godd Humor,
    TNT was out 2 get me so that was the rumor,
    "Ni___ turned state on me,caught 4 felonies"
    "R.I.C.O ACT they had, she was mad sad"
    (THAT'S BAD)
    Chapter 2 lil' ni___ goin upstate, no doubt about it
    they'll consider me young bait,
    Thinkin' quietly till da bus got to some gate,
    the story of my life always led by bum fate,
    Seems da Devil had his fire shining over me,
    that 1st year there seem 2 bring out da worst in me,
    Some stupid ass nig__ tried to make me for sodomy,
    calm dat motherfucker down gave him a lobotomy,
    Started rollin with da older Puerto Ricans there,
    showed then all that this nig__ wasn't weak & scared,
    Ready 2 slice & tear, riot without a care,
    I had 2 earn my keep so I considered it fair,
    The older Puerto Ricans put me under their wings yes!,
    I grew my own flew away from the King's nest,
    Ni____ didn't say a thing when I started 2 invest,
    time on da books G.E.D was my quest yes,
    Made da 1st board after doin' 9,
    6700 dollar check was all mine,
    Reported & my P.O payed me no mind,
    went back 2 da hood and invested every single dime,
    Not that Iwas thinkin' 247 negative,
    had 2 change the stamp so I called it EXECUTIVE,
    Was da 1st 2 cut shit with a mild sedative,
    customers said "Shit Is Good" yeah I bet it is,
    "Just another page in my book of life"
    "4 those who know! U know!"
    (CHAPTER 3)
    Made a lil money and left other hungry ni____ eat,
    that's the only way that you're gonna really keep,
    Whatever wealth U had, inside duffle bags,
    dressed poor as shit wearing ruffled rags,
    84 caught with "OPERATION PRESSURE POINT"
    my lil' brother was da 1 that I did annoint,
    2 take control of the family business,
    wile me and 50 co-defendants justbecame prisoners,
    Back then there were no mediums, no minimums,
    no fuckin' camps, no dorms, I never been in them,
    Straight 2 Attica, Sing Sing, or Fishkill,
    No talkin' in da halls eatin' quiet as U sit still (ON DA NOISE!)
    Did my time plus 2 for violation,
    came out in 93 with pent up frustration,
    Started rationalizing justifications,
    took over Clinton St. without notification,
    They had the Sanchez brothers under a microscope,
    time 2 give up this vicious cycle of dope,
    If I can only get out without casualties I hope,
    2 some warm ass Island I was ready 2 elope,
    Made a lil' something left B4 they can hit us,
    U know U gotta leave when UR hands feel da jitters,
    For 1 full year we had cops as baby-sitters,
    invented community service pickin up crazy litter,
    "Turned my shit around, Enough is enough"
    (FINAL CHAPTER)
    Been free from all dat shit free from all da bad habits,
    Now I sit down and counsel mad addicts,
    Did Dope, Coke,Acid, Methadone, and Xanax,
    doin' well feelin good about myself extatic,
    Don't splurge like B4 well there's nothing 2 really spend,
    just a humble mother fucker with nearly no friends,
    Every1 I grew up with clearly reached their end,
    hope U listened to this message that I fuckin dearly send.
    Last edited by skillfulgil; 13-10-2008 at 12:52 AM.

  2. #2
    Registered User vaughn's Avatar
    Join Date
    30 May 2008
    Location
    the sip by way of SD
    Posts
    333

    Default Re: Life Story

    i actually listened to the whole track, good shit man, solid lyrical content and the story was def. interesting.... thanks for the post.

  3. #3
    I Am...Stephon Intense Hof's Avatar
    Join Date
    26 Nov 2004
    Location
    Scarborough
    Age
    31
    Posts
    2,868

    Default Re: Life Story

    this is cool, i like the story telling, you got a good flow, but this isn't my usual ish, too old sounding for me, but you aren't bad, one tip it sounds like you have too much reverb on your vocals
    When I Asked God To Describe My Crew This Happened



    Myspace|Youtube|Twitter

    Disclaimer
    If you do not like what I have to say, responding to it only makes you look as dumb as you think I am, because I really, really do not care what so ever about what you have to say.

  4. #4
    Elite Artist
    Artist of the Year
    skillfulgil's Avatar
    Join Date
    16 Sep 2008
    Location
    Shhhhhhhhh. You Already Know
    Posts
    682

    Default Re: Life Story

    I'm an old ass ----- man. That reverb is my geritol. LMAO!! Nah but I actually did wat Shady said 2 do, didn't double up on my vocals, took of delay. And the reverb is at a minimum. But I'll see wat else I can do. Thanks 4 da positive feedback..

  5. #5
    I Am...Stephon Intense Hof's Avatar
    Join Date
    26 Nov 2004
    Location
    Scarborough
    Age
    31
    Posts
    2,868

    Default Re: Life Story

    i have a tutorial here somewhere if you're using adobe audition
    When I Asked God To Describe My Crew This Happened



    Myspace|Youtube|Twitter

    Disclaimer
    If you do not like what I have to say, responding to it only makes you look as dumb as you think I am, because I really, really do not care what so ever about what you have to say.

  6. #6
    Audio & Design Extraordinaire Lethal Illness's Avatar
    Join Date
    02 Jun 2006
    Location
    Long Island, New York
    Age
    26
    Posts
    1,262

    Default Re: Life Story

    this shit is hot and yeah good look sounds like a lil too much reverb still but this is fuckin hott new york puerto ricans MUST think alike my first single ima release in the next few weeks is called story of my life as well as the mixtape name lol but this shit is fire bro keep it up
    Need Help on CP!? PM - Twitter - FB
    Desoulbel Design & Recording Studio
    - I make things look and sound dope.

  7. #7
    Audio & Design Extraordinaire Lethal Illness's Avatar
    Join Date
    02 Jun 2006
    Location
    Long Island, New York
    Age
    26
    Posts
    1,262

    Default Re: Life Story

    im not gonna like i listen to this and the other song on this beat a lot now cause its madd inspirational actually your storys are fuckin good bro
    Need Help on CP!? PM - Twitter - FB
    Desoulbel Design & Recording Studio
    - I make things look and sound dope.

  8. #8
    Elite Artist
    Artist of the Year
    skillfulgil's Avatar
    Join Date
    16 Sep 2008
    Location
    Shhhhhhhhh. You Already Know
    Posts
    682

    Default Re: Life Story

    Shady?? They're not stories..

  9. #9
    Audio & Design Extraordinaire Lethal Illness's Avatar
    Join Date
    02 Jun 2006
    Location
    Long Island, New York
    Age
    26
    Posts
    1,262

    Default Re: Life Story

    yeah of your life its true word i respect it
    Need Help on CP!? PM - Twitter - FB
    Desoulbel Design & Recording Studio
    - I make things look and sound dope.

  10. #10
    Registered User Rizzo Rapz's Avatar
    Join Date
    07 Feb 2008
    Location
    u.s. of A
    Posts
    363

    Default Re: Life Story

    i think this is a quality track.good beat, good lyrics.i'm not sure if i like your vocal presence though.im still deciding.im ol school too so the flow sounds right to me.

Similar Threads

  1. Mission Impossible III: Full Review
    By wunthugspassion in forum Off Topic
    Replies: 2
    Last Post: 10-05-2006, 9:44 PM
  2. Last Holiday: Full Review
    By wunthugspassion in forum Off Topic
    Replies: 0
    Last Post: 07-05-2006, 7:14 AM
  3. Get Rich or Die Tryin' (50 CENT) movie reviews
    By wunthugspassion in forum Off Topic
    Replies: 0
    Last Post: 07-04-2006, 11:52 AM

Bookmarks

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •  
About CrazyPellas

CrazyPellas is a great music community that was founded in 2004, for Artists, DJs and Producers to Upload Music, Share Music and Get Feedback on your Music. We are constantly striving to improve CrazyPellas and ask you to contact us if you have any suggestions or if their is anything that we can help you with.

Connect With Us