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    Default Lesane "The Artist" Can't Stop Stuntin (Plz Leave Feedback)

    The Song Is Not Yet Finished But This Is What I Have So Far...


    Last edited by cuzzinboo; 26-07-2008 at 10:20 PM.

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    Default Re: Lesane "The Artist" Can't Stop Stuntin (Plz Leave Feedback)

    the feeling of the track is kool ~~ maybe u should equalize your vocals 2 get a clearer sound.
    turn up the Db of the first verse it sounds a lil 2 low for me , the hook is perfect!
    let us hear more cuzz'

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    Default Re: Lesane "The Artist" Can't Stop Stuntin (Plz Leave Feedback)

    the concept is cool and the lyrics step rite, but yea u may hav to turn the vocals up and do sumthin to the sound so it can be easier to understand

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    Default Re: Lesane "The Artist" Can't Stop Stuntin (Plz Leave Feedback)

    soon as you said "when i ate breakfast i can't stop stuntin" i had wrote this off as garbage..what would make you write that?

    that hook was ass

    tha verse was no better but you had a nice flow you need to take da effect off your vocal other then that its aii but im not really feeling it much

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    Default Re: Lesane "The Artist" Can't Stop Stuntin (Plz Leave Feedback)

    that echo effect ruins everything for me...not feeling the beat either sorry...i dont think you should finish this one...just move on to something else man
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    Default Re: Lesane "The Artist" Can't Stop Stuntin (Plz Leave Feedback)

    the beat is old and the effects is horrible... but i never said it was a studio quality song... i recorded it with my web cam and edited it on goldwave... thanks for the obvious feedback though... check out my new songs...

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    Default Re: Lesane "The Artist" Can't Stop Stuntin (Plz Leave Feedback)

    well the beat was ok, you already stated you know you quality of the recordings so im not gonna say anything bout that you know you needa fix it up and mix and master, you had a concept that was iight but lyrics was on some typical snap level, the cant stop stuntin part in the hook was the only part i was feelin the breakfast part and all that was just wack but good try like hof said just move on to another song cause i dunno the gusto of the song was killed for me as well
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    Default Re: Lesane "The Artist" Can't Stop Stuntin (Plz Leave Feedback)

    thanks once again... im sorry if u guys can't see what im doin... i don't want to sound like anyone else... the original song by petey pablo was ass... not my version... im gonna create my own style and not be like anyone else in the rap game... i aint goin to be no lil wayne or anybody... yall will see one day...

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