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    Default Leatherface sick and twisted, renegade beat feedback please

    "come sit, sip from my holey water/ fresh dripped, from the veins of the innocents ive had to slaughter/ imagine the voice of a daughter, begging for the life of a father/ decided ta let him live turned and shot her"
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    Default Re: Leatherface sick and twisted, renegade beat feedback please

    cruise to your mama's house without any weapons,
    gut the bitch with my teeth and start fucking her intestens
    Sick is an understatement but thats why i like your stuff, thats some nasty shit Ron but keep doing it.

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    Default Re: Leatherface sick and twisted, renegade beat feedback please

    sry not feelin it that much. in my eyes u need a lot of work ur on and off da beat alot. Ur lyrics r very differnt not sure how much im liking em. But keep it up, u'll get up there more. '1'

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    Default Re: Leatherface sick and twisted, renegade beat feedback please

    Naw I liked this audio, just like I liked the written drop to it, I like your flow. you know when your gonna say what, and how your gonna say it.

    Ron if I ever put together a d-12 like group, your the bizzare duke


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    i would rather be the eminem but fuck it ill be bizzy cause hes a funny muthafucka

    thanks for the feed
    "come sit, sip from my holey water/ fresh dripped, from the veins of the innocents ive had to slaughter/ imagine the voice of a daughter, begging for the life of a father/ decided ta let him live turned and shot her"
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    Default Re: Leatherface sick and twisted, renegade beat feedback please

    feelin this sick twisted shit, you sell it too, doesnt sound fake at all. as far as Bizzare, definatly u wit them lyrics.... i hear you on the drop too bro...

    "i got crabs bigger than my dick, they bight and pinch, I fight and itch, i like this shit"

    although, i cant help but have eminem and jay in my head the whole time...
    anyway, some sick shit brother....

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    thanks for the feed yall, im glad to nobody takin offense to shit, but if ya do take offense to it anyone, just tell me and ill give you the finger
    "come sit, sip from my holey water/ fresh dripped, from the veins of the innocents ive had to slaughter/ imagine the voice of a daughter, begging for the life of a father/ decided ta let him live turned and shot her"
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    Default Re: Leatherface sick and twisted, renegade beat feedback please

    i listened to this shit wit my eye brows up like what tha fuck da whole time

    you want me to believe u do that crazy shit?? i barely understand u this was morbid and like kinda i dont no not my style

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    Default Re: Leatherface sick and twisted, renegade beat feedback please

    lol thats what i want, i want mufukas to be like "did he just say that shit" but was my flow a lil better on it dub? thats what i wanted you to let me know, if it was
    "come sit, sip from my holey water/ fresh dripped, from the veins of the innocents ive had to slaughter/ imagine the voice of a daughter, begging for the life of a father/ decided ta let him live turned and shot her"
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    Default Re: Leatherface sick and twisted, renegade beat feedback please

    tha flow was better but it wasn't on point...your still reading off the paper and you dont exactly have to prounounce words the way they are spelled in rap music sometimes u have to break it down a lil bit and try to shape it your way and make it sound hot.

    It was an improvement but can we work on one thing at a time because your gonna confuse me put out the music your pationate about and shy away from tracks that may have people think u garbage...

    and if you want to do a song like this then your going to have to figure out a way to dilever the lyrics in more of a story form so it doesn't sound so rediculus. This is hip-hop and no matter how different we trying to be this was jus out there and nobody in they right mind wants to hear that...true story man

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    Default Re: Leatherface sick and twisted, renegade beat feedback please

    na

    this type of shit aint u, u dont have the delivery or flow for it

    u sound mad bored on the mic n out of breath at times, u reading forsure i can tell

    the outro sounds forced when u sayin im crazy i got shit wrong with me yada yada

    i dunno imo i dont think this is the style u want, thanks for the shoutout though

    keep workin still u find something that works 1
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    Default Re: Leatherface sick and twisted, renegade beat feedback please

    nah im in the begining of laryngitist(spelling) and shit fuckin my voice and shit up (not making excuses) so it was forced as hell but i thount it was nice thanks for the feed though
    "come sit, sip from my holey water/ fresh dripped, from the veins of the innocents ive had to slaughter/ imagine the voice of a daughter, begging for the life of a father/ decided ta let him live turned and shot her"
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    Default Re: Leatherface sick and twisted, renegade beat feedback please

    19 views and only six reply? oh well thanks for the love
    "come sit, sip from my holey water/ fresh dripped, from the veins of the innocents ive had to slaughter/ imagine the voice of a daughter, begging for the life of a father/ decided ta let him live turned and shot her"
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    Default Re: Leatherface sick and twisted, renegade beat feedback please

    only 4 people that viewed didn't reply u in pretty good shape but look at some of my threads i hate that shit

    anyhoe i made that beat for u check it out in da home made section if u like it i will send it to u

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    Default Re: Leatherface sick and twisted, renegade beat feedback please

    only 6 people replied 19 viewedon sound click, are you counting posts? cause that leaves 13 people who havent replied, yeah it sucks, i dont listen unless i reply
    "come sit, sip from my holey water/ fresh dripped, from the veins of the innocents ive had to slaughter/ imagine the voice of a daughter, begging for the life of a father/ decided ta let him live turned and shot her"
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