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    King of the castle - YouTube

    first track off the next mixtape let me kno wat u guys think

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    Instrumental sounds awesome! Around 33 seconds it sounds like the vocals may be off beat? I'm not completely sure. Maybe someone else will notice so it can be confirmed, nice work!



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    I like your voice on the track, fits pretty well. The lyrics that I could pick out were dope, obviously on a first listen it's hard to pick up all the lyrics. Is it an original hook? If so, it's pretty good, I like that. I like the whole overall vibe, can't really see anything that I would change or improve upon, other than the tag on the beat gets a bit annoying, but if you can't do anything about that you can't do anything about it

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    appreciate the feed guys everything noted.

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    Good beat choice, it matches your voice perfectly. Had some pretty good lines "The way I make words play, you would think this is scrabble" That was a interesting line. I also like the hook as well, unique and it has appeal to the world. I don't really like the second voice as much as the first though, it was harder to hear and it didn't stand out as much personally. Stay at the grind though
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