Julian Keaton - The Intro Freestyle

Hey CP fam,

Its been a minute since I last posted anything. Well I decided it was time to get out of my cave, and record something. Decided to just freestyle while recording. This is what turned out. Let me know what you think.

What's goody?
I just got done listening to ya jammy.
You definitely get props just for the instrumental alone.
It's a straight classic, NO DOUBT!
As far as the rhymes, they were pretty good for not being written.
It seems like you may have slipped up a little bit, but what do you expect, since the rhymes were off the top.
I give you props for that too, because most people may be a little reluctant so spit something they didn't write,
and just freestyle with it, and then save it and post it so others can critique it.
Keep on doing ya thing, main!
& when you get a chance, give me a feed on my latest joint posted below.
ill "free"style over HOT Preemo beat... for them rowdy hip hoppers
It would be much appreciated. Peace & Respect, from ya boy, Sid Dolomight!

thanks for critiquing. Ill check you out.