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    Default Jay Skip - Divided

    I replied to:
    1.Young Ef Ft Lanski Dont Get It Fucked Up
    2.Hoffa The Supervillian
    3.NEW EFDUB- Efs Bridge (LONDON BRIDGES REMIX)


    AIght I don't claim to be a rapper but heres a little somethin I wrote and put over the beat I made for the CP beat contest goin on right now. Peace

    Heres the link:http://coolrealistic.4t.com/beats/Ja...%20Divided.mp3

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    Default Re: Jay Skip - Divided

    this beat is off the chain boi.. luv the piano, heart felt melody... dont really like the clap/snare u used

    rap needs work.. you speed up sometimes to force the rhyme on beat...
    lyrics not too bad...

    good luck in the beat comp, this is a fire beat my man

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    Default Re: Jay Skip - Divided

    Thanks man for the feed. I listened to a lota your stuff, you a good consistant beat maker. I particularly liked Runs in the family and Opportunities, cocaine was tight too. Peace

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    Default Re: Jay Skip - Divided

    Please provide clickable links man


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    Default Re: Jay Skip - Divided

    hes straight i have seen his replies but u should provide clickable ones

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    Default Re: Jay Skip - Divided

    nice beat, on beat like pimp said you sped up a lil to catch the beat but still nice, all in all bout a 8
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    Default Re: Jay Skip - Divided

    Thanks for listening PDP, Young Ef, Leatherface. Next time I provide clickable links. Peace

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    Default Re: Jay Skip - Divided

    this beat is nice

    you dont sound white when u rap....your draggin your flow a lil bit but it aint that bad...its kinda low vocally but you can turn that up next time u flow

    just work on tha flow more your lyrics are nice jus mos def work on ur flow and how u spit on a beat and u will be aii...and get soundclick too

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    Default Re: Jay Skip - Divided

    Thanks for the good critisizms Ef. I got a soundclick page, but im registered under beats. Maybe when Im better I'll change that. By the way my dad would say I ain't white ;) I'm mixed though, most people can't tell. Peace

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    Default Re: Jay Skip - Divided

    That Was Tight, Liked That Alot. Keep Up The Good Work

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    Default Re: Jay Skip - Divided

    i dislike this beat too computeristic for my liking

    your quality needs a lot of work its hard to hear u, vocals are too low

    your flow needs work when u rap u gotta start on the kick and end on the snare, your voice sounds stiff from what i heard loosen up your delivery

    lyrically it was aight

    i dunno all i can say is keep workin
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    Default Re: Jay Skip - Divided

    Beat is pritty hot feel dat, ur flow needs some work, u got a good story and shit going but try 2 work on da flow sound like u moving trying 2 ride da beat but cant find it right, u almost there, work at it '1'

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