Results 1 to 9 of 9

Thread: ivel the mongol Official (Producer/Rapper)

  1. #1
    Registered User tripcode's Avatar
    Join Date
    23 Apr 2012
    Location
    USA
    Posts
    19

    Default ivel the mongol Official (Producer/Rapper)

    ivel Presents
    PARADIGM SHIFT
    ivel is a rapper/producer from Virginia Beach in the United States. He has been making beats for 6 years and is slowly working his way into the rap game through an EP (ABSYNTH) and a mixtape (Paradigm Shift) which are both slated for release in Fall of 2012. Drawing influence from rappers such as Kendrick Lamar, Kanye West, Ab-Soul, Tyler The Creator, Earl Sweatshirt, and Childish Gambino, he uses a mixture of imagery and comedic value to create his music.
    Paradigm Shift will focus not only on the changes ivel is experiencing, but the change he believes will soon come to the world and humanity as well as the rap game.

    Anyway, enough of this bio bullshit, let's get to the music.

    BANDCAMP for ivel the Mongol

    PARADIGM SHIFT


    DREAMS



    LIKE DAN (Prod. by Isaiah Merriweather)



    ABSYNTH EP




    *All beats produced by ivel unless otherwise stated.
    Last edited by tripcode; 13-06-2012 at 2:10 AM.

  2. #2
    Registered User tripcode's Avatar
    Join Date
    23 Apr 2012
    Location
    USA
    Posts
    19

    Default Re: ivel the mongol Official (Producer/Rapper)



    New track for an upcoming project. Can I get some feedback? And if ANYONE has any tips for mixing/mastering I would GREATLY appreciate it because I've been trying and trying and trying to mix and master but I keep getting the same muddy results even when I roll off low frequencies and shit. TIPS would be much appreciated.

    Quote Originally Posted by Lyrics
    If it wasn't for my father figure
    I wouldn't figure out how
    I could ever make six figures
    Or have a daily meal to chow
    Grubbin' on the grimiest of the food groups
    While dreamin' bout drivin 'round a MR-2 coupe
    Woop-de-woop
    Gotta get my life correct
    Cause even workin for the state
    I can't seem to get that check
    That I really need to sustain myself
    Blowin' off dust from
    all the records sittin on the shelf
    Flip a sample, chop it till it bleeds
    Until it seeps into my soul and
    my words express my needs
    Come up with a verse, grab the pad and pen
    Write until my fingers cramp
    Or until I break the pen
    Cause I go hard over beats, not throughout life
    Cause I gotta keep composure
    just to deal with all the strife
    And I would never front
    And try to act tough
    Cause truth is I'm a pacifist
    I have no need to be rough

  3. #3
    Registered User tripcode's Avatar
    Join Date
    23 Apr 2012
    Location
    USA
    Posts
    19

    Default Re: ivel the mongol Official (Producer/Rapper)

    Can I get some feedback y'all? If I suck, let me know. I wanna improve as much as I can.

  4. #4
    Straight Up Piff A. Woods's Avatar
    Join Date
    02 Dec 2004
    Location
    MN
    Age
    31
    Posts
    3,571

    Default Re: ivel the mongol Official (Producer/Rapper)

    First, I think you'll get more responses if you just put ONE track in each post. So I just listened to Dreams. It's not bad. But drop off some of the delay/reverb you have on the vocals, other than that, sounds pretty dope

  5. #5

    Default Re: ivel the mongol Official (Producer/Rapper)

    I listened to the dreams beat. It was pretty cool, as far as the beat go. I think the actual rapping has potential, not amazing or anything, but I think you have a good voice that can be made better and improved on with the overall craft your developing to make yourself better. The Beat kind of Reminded me of Odd Future a little bit, Some shit that would sound good with Frank Ocean. Solid Beat, keep at it.
    Check me out as well
    http://www.crazypellas.net/artist-au...ill-rtf-67546/

  6. #6
    Registered User tripcode's Avatar
    Join Date
    23 Apr 2012
    Location
    USA
    Posts
    19

    Default Re: ivel the mongol Official (Producer/Rapper)



    [HOOK]
    Lamborghini, Bugatti,
    Her body got me
    Screamin lawdy
    Whip it like an import
    Ferrari

    Lamborghini, Bugatti,
    Her body got me
    Screamin lawdy
    Whip it like an import
    Ferrari
    I didn't get her call
    Called her back told her sorry
    I couldn't hear the ringin then
    Over the sound of the engine
    Let her friends in,
    Even though it's two doors
    If they stacked lap on lap
    We might just have room for more
    Shut the doors, speakers blast
    We living wild and fast
    I'm back to the Future
    These other cats stuck in the past
    McFly, she told me fuck them other guys
    I hover, you bored just like monopoly supplies
    Surprise!
    My newest shit arrived
    A brand new style aside from
    tired eyes and tie-dye
    Drop the top, pop the hood up in the parking lot
    Pink slips passed around like "Is it mine or not?"
    Feelin for ignition, penetration, try to find the slot
    If I can get it in, fuck red lights, I'll never stop
    People crowding 'round askin if it's automatic
    That's when I grill em and tell em I had to work hard at it
    Too fast, disappeared, these kids thought it was magic
    Pushin thru the alley switchin gears like an auto mechanic
    Atomic and its tires blow smoke like a chimney dammit
    Got her screechin from the way that I work it on the surface
    Drop it so hard I got her fish tailin on purpose
    And it's never endin, cause my tires stay spinnin

    [HOOK]

    She dripped out, cause I did a number on her.
    Murdered out, all black, let me put the spoiler on her.
    Roll paper, blow cash, repeat the process
    All summer this is import bitch,
    Fuck who drive a hummer
    Little dipshit, let me get your asian bitch
    If not her, let me get on that Eurasian tip
    I like em with a nice pink interior
    Finger split down the lips,
    Pussy poppin cause I hit that shit
    Beat it up like Obama and the economy
    Your girl with the pink slips tryna come onto me
    I took your papers, and now she stays fondling
    Everything I own, she call me the Saab King
    Cause I'm a Baas and can't nobody stop me
    With an entourage, that's people who stay following
    Close behind the caravan because they know
    Where all the bitches waitin' man, stop hatin.
    I made the beat, me rapping, written by me. I'm probably going to redo the hook soon.

  7. #7
    Registered User nockturn's Avatar
    Join Date
    22 Feb 2008
    Location
    Upstate New York / Da 315
    Posts
    841

    Default Re: ivel the mongol Official (Producer/Rapper)

    listened to dreams and its ok.. beat is good.. rapping can be stepped up more.. but other than that good stuff
    My Upcoming Debut Electronica Album "Visions"

    Coming Soon. Release Date: TBD

  8. #8

    Default Re: ivel the mongol Official (Producer/Rapper)

    I like that style anyway so to me "dreams" was dope..of course one could always have better lines, but I dig it. Only thing I´d to is put more adlibs in it to get the sick feel but thats just an opinion. Stay blessed. HRRSN

  9. #9
    Registered User tripcode's Avatar
    Join Date
    23 Apr 2012
    Location
    USA
    Posts
    19

    Default Re: ivel the mongol Official (Producer/Rapper)

    Thanks everyone, be sure to check out some of the new stuff!

Bookmarks

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •  
About CrazyPellas

CrazyPellas is a great music community that was founded in 2004, for Artists, DJs and Producers to Upload Music, Share Music and Get Feedback on your Music. We are constantly striving to improve CrazyPellas and ask you to contact us if you have any suggestions or if their is anything that we can help you with.

Connect With Us