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    Default Intro 2 Complexity

    1 verse, the track is produced by this cat named: TeDoubleDy.




    Lyrics:

    In this life, you can get caught up in hesitation
    That stunts your motivation
    So you just stop
    I
    Got to be on the top
    But I canít because a lot of people say Iím not pop.
    Like Tupac,
    I got the ambitions as a rider so Iím going to ride;
    Jack's bean in the concrete
    Reaching for the sky.
    Iím searching for the hen with the golden eggs,
    Not acknowledging I lay them when I use my pen.
    Iím striving to keep my head up
    Thriving strictly for my fellows
    Like Royce who would be disheartened if I ever embrace failure.
    Heís a confidant who brought me confidence, so for recompense
    I offer him tracks like throwback Common Sense.
    Never will I speak of senseless acts of malevolence,
    I rather get my grind on like the Fiasco Lupe
    Than kick and push in a hoopty
    Slanging drugs from Monday until my Armageddon death day
    Only to turn white like cold play
    In a grave box from sniffing an unsold product.

    Be ease.
    ComplXx
    (The Visible Revolutionary)
    Last edited by Visible; 09-03-2008 at 1:52 AM.
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    first thing of course i notice is da beat is fucking crazy yo who made that shit??? its kinda empty at first you should invite us in more

    im not feelin you tho, you aint really on da beat right u remind me of a 2pac outlaw type ----- this aint ya type beat u need drums and deep baselines

    u picked it up a lil bit toward da end but u hoped ond a beat real sloppy other then that keep postin

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    yeah i have 2 agree with young ef : i feel u but on this track u sound a lil off beat man!
    but i love this instrumental/ your style iz tight and u should see if u could re_do this track but i should shut the fuck up and giving u propz for ya work visible , awesome lyriks---the voice iz kool---and the "I’m searching for the hen with the golden eggs,
    Not acknowledging I lay them when I use my pen" line iz dope as hell //// please don't stop postin man!!!! i alwayz like 2 listen 2 your songs / u alwayz came up wit the gud' shit--- keep doing da damn thang visible
    later man

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    Default Re: Intro 2 Complexity

    your flow is so weird...it sounds like u dont know what a bar of music is though....

    the beat is alright...i dunno im not feeling u though
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    Default Re: Intro 2 Complexity

    I play with my bars, i break my bars on purpose because I don't like to confine myself. The point was to come in off, like i was "hesitating."
    I am a poet first, rapper second- everything is intentional. Thanks for the feed!
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    dont give me that im a poet stuff because i know 100000s of poets me being one of them my boy coolie everybody in hip-hop is a poet you cant judge a poet by what they put in they stanzas but what they feel when they write it.

    A writer is a writer but its up to that writer to take seriously his or hers craft. Now you say you a poet great your an excellent writer but don't come around hip-hoppers pitching your poetry and then not understand it when you getting the response owed to a rapper

    long story short if you wanna try on rapper timz then wear them the right way. Nothing wrong with poetry being your first love but if you gonna dance in this hip-hop thing aint nothin wrong with gettin ya 2 step right and being on beat and sounding like you have a true passion for it.

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    Young Ef You Need To calm Down...Cuz you Need ALOT Of Work urself. (I HAVE HEARD SOME OF UR STUFF)


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    you i dont no who this shadow person is but somebody need to get boy da fuck away from my threads real t he on his beyonce shit not knowing about me to well

    who da fuck asked this dude to come around here making comments about what i say to another man?

    this man is here trying to work on his elevation process my job as the creator and mod of this section is to help emcees achieve that any way i see fit. I was giving him advice if you not hear to post rhymes give advice or feedback that is going to contribute to the elevation of these artist do us a favor and continue sucking your dick on another part of the fourm real T

    we try to keep this a drama free setting round here unless u bout to pick up da mic

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    Quote Originally Posted by Young Ef View Post
    dont give me that im a poet stuff because i know 100000s of poets me being one of them my boy coolie everybody in hip-hop is a poet you cant judge a poet by what they put in they stanzas but what they feel when they write it.

    A writer is a writer but its up to that writer to take seriously his or hers craft. Now you say you a poet great your an excellent writer but don't come around hip-hoppers pitching your poetry and then not understand it when you getting the response owed to a rapper

    long story short if you wanna try on rapper timz then wear them the right way. Nothing wrong with poetry being your first love but if you gonna dance in this hip-hop thing aint nothin wrong with gettin ya 2 step right and being on beat and sounding like you have a true passion for it.
    I understand where your coming from and I was def. off beat- it was intentionally. I was trying to break the bar and then catch the bar in an unpredictable and good way; I guess I did not achieve that. The 3 bars and how i delivered it, "in this life, you can caught up hestitation that stunts your motivation I- gotta to be on top but i can't cuz alot folk say i'm not pop" was actually a free style and i liked how i delivered and then wrote the rest. I'll just practice bein' more effective in breakin' my bar and bringin' it back; cuz i def think something good can come from it. Thanks for the feed.
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    Chill Youg Ef With All the Slick Talk...Cuz Right Now Ur Bein A "INTERNET GANGSTER". I Aint Wit All That Fam. I Was Not trying To Pause This Guys Growth I Was Just Sayin that Yeah Im new Here, But I Too Am An MC And KNow When I Hear Something That Needs Work, As Well As Some Of My Stuff Does And yours, And Visibles So Calm Ur Ass Down.... Real T. Anyways Sorry For The drama VISIBLE In Ur Thread But, Young Ef Bein the "Super Mod" Of This Sections Tells Me All I Need To Know About It.


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    Default Re: Intro 2 Complexity

    yeah and if me being tha mod here means you will stop posting here quicker thank god

    anywayz visible i know a good artist for you to listen too..they do that off beat rap

    you ever herd of capadona from Wu-Tang clan?

    if not he is kinda like the forgotten member..they photoshop him out of group pictures they always give him the short verses on the song and he just never around that much but he is on a lot of the records. The reason i think you can learn a lot from how capadona or any member of the wu tang is how they deliver they flow because they do tha same shit u do

    Wu tang clan-Triumph
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=http:...?v=qQfVte5nfg0

    one minute they on beat next minute they off..so check out some wu tang shit mainly capadona see if it doesn't help u out..i'll start you off wit a lil video right here

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