Independent rap artist "Da General" from Canada finds some Vybe beats

What yall think of this?

turn the gain down and i listen to uk grime but his accent is really hard to follow ... it seems hes on time though... if he got mixed right it might actually sound pretty hot

K loving the hook and beat but I don't understand or feel the vibes of the rapper at all :/ definitely learn how to roll on the mic better, flow needs to be way more constant and clear -peace

I think you should re-record it, and make sure that you enunciate and try to stay on beat throughout. Not too bad thoe.