Hallo, I'm a rapper from germany and I tried to make a rap in english. I'm rapping for quite two years but not often. I have made a track called girls wanna shake their azz when I come around on the beat: come and get it
I'm new in this rap game and I need urgent some feedback, WHAT CAN I DO BETTER TO IMPROVE MY RAP, IF THIS RAP SOUNDS OKAY (it's my first time with mastering and I wasn't very good)
and I'm going to practise and try to improve me and my rapskills
thanks to everyone how is going to help me

this is my song:
girlzz wanna shake their azz - eSnips, share anything