Hallo, I'm a rapper from germany and I tried to make a rap in english. I'm rapping for quite two years but not often. I have made a track called girls wanna shake their azz when I come around on the beat: come and get it
I'm new in this rap game and I need urgent some feedback, WHAT CAN I DO BETTER TO IMPROVE MY RAP, IF THIS RAP SOUNDS OKAY (it's my first time with mastering and I wasn't very good)
JUST GIVE ME SOME FEEDBACK
and I'm going to practise and try to improve me and my rapskills
thanks to everyone how is going to help me
chris

this is my song:
girlzz wanna shake their azz - eSnips, share anything