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    Default First Track - Propaganda

    http://www.zshare.net/audio/3066995fa6c6ef/

    It's a new track. Was originally gonna be about personal issues, but I figured I'd set things on a larger scale. Check it out.

    The lyrics.

    I fuck shit up, I'm the reason for mass destruction
    An abomination to the cause, like Hitler's lead to the corruption
    Can't any other man attest to half the things that I do
    My generosity is like that of a tightly tied noose
    I'm a liar, and a cheater, but I still have better morals
    In control of the sea, I change the color of the corals
    With my words that you know express controversy, no lie
    At the same time I'm the one who brings a tear to your eye
    I can't help but address all the sickness in the earth
    Shit's just gettin crazy, it's like this is the Devil's birth
    You're a Liar, liar, your eyes contain fire
    The blaze of hell's fury burns inside of your desires
    You money hungry bitch, I'm gettin sick of all this shit
    All we want's the fuckin truth, there's no need for all of this
    So like I said, I'm the reason for everything wrong
    Don't give into their lies, you better keep your head strong.

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    Default Re: First Track - Propaganda

    it was good for a first effort, u need to work on your mic cadence, u seem very uncomfortable infront of the mic, work on your delivery, make the words flow a little better know, the intro was far too long like i waited 3 beat drops for u to go in, umm try n put more emphasis in your bars, cause when u do something like this u gotta rap like u mean it, and it sounds like you're reading a bit

    but eh at least you're on beat
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    The reason there's a huge intro is because the first part is a hook and I haven't come up with one yet.

    I try not to be too loud on this mic cause..well...it's a headset. XD I'll try and be louder and see how it sounds tomorrow also, cause I recorded this at 1 AM and people are asleep.

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    lol dont make excuses, ive been doing this 7 years im just telling u what u need to work on
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    hey man it's not bad for ur first one, it's way better than when i started.

    good job keep at it

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    beat is really good and lyrics are also nice . flow is good too.

    but flow needs some work. good job

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