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    Registered User Rizzo Rapz's Avatar
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    Default Fettucini (crit me up!!!)

    if u thougt my other beats were weird...well hope you enjoy.

    Last edited by Rizzo Rapz; 19-06-2008 at 2:42 PM.

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    Default Re: Fettucini (crit me up!!!)

    I love this, I'll def. remeber this chourus, Shits funny. Like the beat to this one, its coo', this is goin' into my sig. Keep makin some things like thin once in a while.
    "Runnin' up on me thats your life,
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    Default Re: Fettucini (crit me up!!!)

    Nice Shyt Pimp...It very creative....I like the Hook...The Beat Is On Point...

    Keep Doing Yo Thang....

    Stay Up

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    Default Re: Fettucini (crit me up!!!)

    The way it flow is like something that Mac Dre or Redman would do. The hook and the beat got me the most with its rhymth but the song itself is crazy so stay at it.

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    Default Re: Fettucini (crit me up!!!)

    keep hope alive!!!!-

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    the only thing that i can say this is missing, is more of the energy in your flow u know. maybe amp it just a tad instead of just spittin lyrics u know. And the beat's drums sound amaturish but i dig the melody because it fits perfect with the hook, and i dig the hook. I think the track is tight overall man, and lmao @ SO I BOUGHT HER A WAL MART CARRRRRRRRRRRRRD.

    keep it up fam, stay at it peace.
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    lol ur voice on the verse sound like tical...not the flow though

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    Default Re: Fettucini (crit me up!!!)

    tupac is alive!!! thanks for the looks fellas.

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    achoo!
    Get out that box.

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