Ex-Cell - Otis (Remix) Featuring M.O.E (feedback Please!! I will Return the Favor!!)

Check it out. Ex-Cell (Me) Featuring M.O.E - Otis (Remix) -

I liked it but there were times when the vocals were being washed out by the beat had to really strain to hear the verse but dopw shit

Before I comment on the actual track I need to say I like how comfortable you are in front of the camera...it actually kept me watching rather than going to another tab and just listening to the track.

As far as the track its cool...kinda didn't want to listen to it because everybody and they mama is doing this beat so you got that riding against you. But you held your own over it, compared to other freestyles I heard on it this wasn't special but you DEFINITELY have a dope flow and great confidence on your track. I don't need to give you feedback in that area...I do think you got some cool lines too but if there's anything you need to work on it coming harder with the lines since you got the flow locked down. How old are you btw? And honestly, the other dude you had on the track had flow too but there was no personality in his voice or verse. I found myself zoning out when he started rhyming. It's like he's just there. His flow was nice but he needs a lil more than that.

Anyway good job on the joint and I'll be looking for more.

You have energy on the song and in the video. That's a good thing to have, stick with that. Flow is dope. Some cool lines in there too.

dope lyrics, dope video, the level of the vocals needs to be just a little higher so the sample and the vocals aren't fighting for volume space on the track in my opinion but thats a small observation i made that may not matter at all cuz everything else is so dope! great job guys and keep em coming!

Sorry eveyrone I have been gone form the forums for quite some time thanks for all the feedback though!