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    Default Everything Remains Raw freestyle

    yo what up me and my cuzzo recording this track over busta's everything remains raw (back when he was dope)..anyway check it out some feedback would be much appreciated. I'm the first verse and my cuzzo Blaque Plaque has the second verse. as of know we're recording under the name iLL UniVersity


    http://soundcloud.com/michael-parker...niversity-feat

    peace

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    Default Re: Everything Remains Raw freestyle

    okay the sound quality could be a little better i honestly have no idea what your talking about i might have to listen twice it sounds like you just saying a bunch of shit that sounds alright together

    swagga jacking busta rhymes was a fail u sounded crazy screaming ITS ONLY 9 MONTHS LEFT and doing his sounds like that ahaha shit no some stuff is reserved for busta rhymes

    these lyrics are meaningless sound decent but you aint saying shit this is one of those songs where i have to say FAIL

    i got hyped cause i love that beat the best thing u said u fuck with no condom cause it all remains raw...get some stronger lyrical content and stop reading off the page

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    thanks for the feedback...but first of all we wasn't swagga jacking son...its called paying homage...cuz if that's swagga then everything in the industry is swagga jacking...Like nas said No Ideas Original whether that comes from samples or flow styles...second of all i called it a freestyle for a reason...cuz its just straight bars....battle bars, punchlines whatever you want to call it...its not my fault you can't understand any of the references..you have yourself to blame for that...but I ain't trying to force you to like the track i could careless...Thanks again for the feedback doe... much appreciated

    peace

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    If your freestyles suck don't do them I know how too freestyle never that wack u can't take the truth don't post it's not for everybody right a good song to pay homage not make weird sounds and scream reckless like I said fail

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    I like all the hating son...let's hear it then...go to youtube get the beat and spit over it let's hear you spit this greatness you claim you got...If somehow you can't download it i'll email it to you, since you talking all this shit like you some god emcee...let's hear it...If it's dope i'll give you your props no hesitations i don't need to hate on you dude, i'll be waiting for it

    oh and peace
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    why dont u search my name young ef i started this audio section on this site u clearly dont no who the fuck u talkin to nigga

    if i do decide to return to rapping it wouldnt be to waste my time to prove you suck...done boosting your thread have a good day...u want to learn how to do this check my artist stress but im sure u already did and mad u cant hate on it..have a good day

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    i dissed u for the fuck of it enjoy

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    Default Re: Everything Remains Raw freestyle

    So I checked it out...I don't think its bad. Its not really my style though but it was okay to me. I liked the 1st verse better than the second. I can't pinpoint what it is but somethin about that second verse just rubs me wrong. I think I like the laidback approach to the 1st verse better. I'm not gonna comment on the mixing and stuff cause thats not my area of expertise. Overall its not bad but its not special either.

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    oh i know who i'm talkin to... and i checked your shit out...and its just that....shit...sorry but we all can't rap about our non-existent penis son it just the way life is

    Young Efdub CSpade & JB - Demonstration (Motivation Remix) by DjEfsclusive on SoundCloud - Create, record and share your sounds for free

    "my dick thick and fresh for her, her pussy try to fight back"... yup you Garbage

    oh my bad...these must be those lyrics with meaning you talking about doe... it doesn't end there

    http://www.crazypellas.net/dj-remixe...87/#post340139

    "aw they call me Mrs. eat it all"..you still garbage...

    http://www.crazypellas.net/artist-au...26/#post374419

    and your diss is garbage too you repeat the first four bars like a hundred time...nice try tho..leave the rapping to cats who actually got skill instead of hating everywhere you go...might make life less stressful

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    lmfao that lyric is actually my dick pickin fights with her her pussy trying to fight back

    and umm that shit is old as fuck and its still better than u...lmfao ur sad but it was fun beating on u

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    Quote Originally Posted by Clinton L.G. View Post
    So I checked it out...I don't think its bad. Its not really my style though but it was okay to me. I liked the 1st verse better than the second. I can't pinpoint what it is but somethin about that second verse just rubs me wrong. I think I like the laidback approach to the 1st verse better. I'm not gonna comment on the mixing and stuff cause thats not my area of expertise. Overall its not bad but its not special either.
    Second verse guy here.. thanks for the feedback without all the senseless hatin... i respect that.. it was just a quick freestyle so the mixing never took priority.. even so... its definately not as atrocious as some would have you believe... again... thanks for the feedback my dude.....

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    Default Re: Everything Remains Raw freestyle

    Well done BigGuppy! This got to #3 in the March 2012 Tracks & Songs Charts.
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    Word, that's what's up

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    Default Re: Everything Remains Raw freestyle

    lol. this thread is defiantly entertaining....
    personal opinion Young ef is an F. i got like 30 secs in on ya tracks...please diss me.lol
    ......and @Big Guppy this shoulda been higher than three comparing it to the others.

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    Default Re: Everything Remains Raw freestyle

    YOOOOOOOOOOOo!!! check my sig. just kidding..Nah..CHAMP. yo i dont think u should let people get u in ur box..i know whats its like to want to defend something u believe in when people arent receptive...i say OH FUCKIN WELL and keep it moving with that said U got good mic presence i think....beats a banger of course...this is mix tape material...real good voices decent flow. 7/10
    Get out that box.

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