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Thread: Efdub - Hustle Hard (Get Tha Pack Off) Produced by Mike P

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    Default Re: Efdub - Hustle Hard (Get Tha Pack Off) Produced by Mike P

    I don't like the kick...but the beat is hot. Looking at it from a producers perspective, I think you should have the melody of the hook follow the melody of the beat (was there a hook? I thought I heard one)

    Also I would say when you record, don't double your vocals. Record the verse all the way through, and then record another take where you emphasize certain words and certain bars. And then do your adlibs (the "yeahs" and whatever you put in the background).

    That and some parts sound like your tone is just flat, and monotonous. To me it sounds emotionless (despite what the lyrics say).

    Overall though it's a hot concept and with some shaping it would definitely be a HOT finished song.

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    Default Re: Efdub - Hustle Hard (Get Tha Pack Off) Produced by Mike P

    Quote Originally Posted by A. Woods View Post
    I don't like the kick...but the beat is hot. Looking at it from a producers perspective, I think you should have the melody of the hook follow the melody of the beat (was there a hook? I thought I heard one)

    Also I would say when you record, don't double your vocals. Record the verse all the way through, and then record another take where you emphasize certain words and certain bars. And then do your adlibs (the "yeahs" and whatever you put in the background).

    That and some parts sound like your tone is just flat, and monotonous. To me it sounds emotionless (despite what the lyrics say).

    Overall though it's a hot concept and with some shaping it would definitely be a HOT finished song.

    Hmm yea i tried a diffrent kiCc b-4 but that beat waz at a real high pitch and the kiCc waz havin conflicts wit the bass line,i kno u noticed the bass is kinda high pitched than wut it should be,and as far as the ho0k i jus threw dat in there real quiCc cuz ppl luv 2 tear sumbodys ear off wit that repetitive word,and i liked da beat so i made it wit a ho0k part so it could be a song instead of sum shyt u jus freestyle all over ya feel?

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    Default Re: Efdub - Hustle Hard (Get Tha Pack Off) Produced by Mike P

    damn ef, that was ...fire! i really liked it, the flow lyrics , man everything

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    just peeped...the vocals seem alil low. its a real track...real life that is...and i can feel that...it gets old hearing -----s talk about shit they arent really living. so it was nice to hear some real shit. But in my headphones it was really hard to understand the vocals completely...u should get at me..we could possibly get something poppin....1!

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    Bring ya vocals a little more to the front cause the beat is kind of over shadowin them! Diggin the concept of the song! Remind me of what I call Dead Musik (hiphop/rap emo).. Shit tight! Beat brings emotion to the track and the chrous is perfect for the concept! I always had a thing for tracks about hard times in life... I say its album tracklist ready...

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    Default Re: Efdub - Hustle Hard (Get Tha Pack Off) Produced by Mike P

    i hate the kick on this beat

    your vocals are too low

    buuut im enjoying the track the beat is emotional, hook is real nice on it

    flow n delivery are on point

    nicely done, good track
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