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    Default Dark knight vs. Joka! pt 2 (need crit)

    not very commercial friendly but none of mines is, its pickin up where the first one left off.hope u like.peace

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    Default Re: Dark knight vs. Joka! pt 2 (need crit)

    the beat is to fast,,,,,, and the slow down mic wth distortion is wack

    I aint dissin your craft, I dont know the song of why u coming like this,,,, I wanna give u props on the concept, shit had me feeling like its riding season.

    basically with a properlly set mic (your mixer had to been saying no here homie,,, shit sounds real real bad), and a lower bpm type beat, u might have came hard. But shit hurts my ears, all around, cause it is done so sloppy

    come hard or go home

    shit even your baby mama gonna tell u that

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    Default Re: Dark knight vs. Joka! pt 2 (need crit)

    its good just need better mixing and shit just try to rap about something else other then batman and superman and heros lol

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    i use a 7 dollar computer mic lol thats all my wife will let me spend eventhough i can buy her $200 shoes...DONT GET MARRIED!!!she say "youre too old to be rappin leave it to the young boys" so i can only do it as a hobby.im just tryin to show the new cats
    the art of story tellin. thanks for the looks fellas.
    Last edited by Rizzo Rapz; 12-06-2008 at 12:51 AM.

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    Default Re: Dark knight vs. Joka! pt 2 (need crit)

    This is actually pretty good. I don't see anything wrong with the quality. It's a dope ass concept too, guess I like comic books. 9/10.

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    I wasnt feelin the beat. The rap was fly, I also liked The concept. And it was very suspenceful... However I couldn't Tell who's Perspective it was told from. It sounded like the Joker (to me). or The Joka. Badass rhymeschemes. All-in-All 9/10... I dissagree with that PDP guy.

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    i appreciate that.some people catch it and some dont.i appreciate all the responses.the persective at the begging was the the past , when they were talkin. then when i rap im rappin from the dark knight and this takes place a lil while later.i shouldnt of named this 2 cause i got another two but i wrote some other shit and got side track. so if i ever di drio it its gonna be a lil confusing.
    Last edited by Rizzo Rapz; 02-08-2008 at 2:42 AM.

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    wo...im feelin this for sure

    u remind me of rakim and mobb deep

    ur flow fits the beat. i dont knw what people are saying. ive worked with people like Imaan faith and mopreme shakur so i knw what im talking bout.

    chours us weakish. but overall you have skills for sure

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    Default Re: Dark knight vs. Joka! pt 2 (need crit)

    my bad i forgot to peep this. i appreciate all the feedback, good or bad.far as the chorus if you wanna call it that is sayin "i wish you death"thats the introduction to the Riddla,i thought went hard.
    Last edited by Rizzo Rapz; 19-10-2008 at 7:16 PM.

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    Default Re: Dark knight vs. Joka! pt 2 (need crit)

    Sounds like a cross between Rakeem and Big Daddy Kane. Its an old school flow to it. Wow a $7 MIC? Didn't know they sounded like that though. Yeah married huh? Been there done that.
    Today is ruff, back then they were happy with roses and a card, chocolates, and a movie. LMAO!
    But U do you, keep it going, it's the only way to better in UR craft.

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    Default Re: Dark knight vs. Joka! pt 2 (need crit)

    yep $7 mic.watch your mic boost,know how to talk in the mic and vocal magic pro and voila.
    Last edited by Rizzo Rapz; 20-10-2008 at 4:20 PM.

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