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    Default Re: CTC Ft Youngnatho & Young Ghost

    im feelin this track came out a banger wit the johnny beat nice drop

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    Default Re: CTC Ft Youngnatho & Young Ghost

    thx 4 da rate

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    Default Re: CTC Ft Youngnatho & Young Ghost

    This song was hot...did you mix it Khwame? shit was nice

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    Default Re: CTC Ft Youngnatho & Young Ghost

    i mixxed my own verse they did they own

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    Default Re: CTC Ft Youngnatho & Young Ghost

    Ok Big Q, since you take criticism better than anyone on this site I decided to check this track out and give some input. Since I don't know the other two dudes on the track and they don't be on CP I'm not gonna give feed on them. One thing I will say Is...there doesn't need to be THAT MUCH talking on the intro. Listening to yall talk before the beat drop made me not want to listen to the track. Only talk before the beat drops if you got something interesting or witty to say. And I honestly didn't hear either. It was just a bunch of unnecessary dick riding that made me want to vomit.

    As for your verse.

    Compared to other drops I heard from you this is your best verse yet. I see you have taken some of my advice and applied it to your work and I like that. You are determined and you listen to people who know what they are talking about and you apply it to what you love to do and I respect that ALOT. You even had a line in there that I kinda liked (I forgot it though). Your mixing is notably better than the last time I heard you and your delivery is better.

    That's not to say you don't need improvement. You still got alot of work despite your progress. You can tighten up your delivery a bit more and work on your lyrics. If you keep striving to be better you will be a BEAST, I'm telling you. Besides your lines and delivery, you need to do something about those adlibs. Your adlibs kinda distract me from tuning in to what your actually saying in the main vocals, which is important. The way you mixed it and whatever you said kinda fucked up the vibe of the song. Your lead vocals and your adlibs clashed and made it hard for me to decide what to pay attention to. Mix your ads different or just don't adlib at all. (Not every verse needs adlibs believe it or not)

    Overall, work on your vocal presence a lil more (it actually wasnt too bad though), your delivery, lyrics and your background vocals.

    You're growing as an artist and I am proud of you. You still have a ways to go...keep up the good work.

    If you want any more pointers hit me up via pm and I'll be glad to point you in the right direction.
    Last edited by Clinton L.G.; 21-08-2009 at 1:47 PM.

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    yooo.. that fuckin beat is fire as hell but the dude above me is right about the intro...shit is 2 long...i was about 2 turn it off. wit out the intro its a tough track...as for who did the first verse.. that fitted pretty good. i turned off da track after the first verse and the people talkin on the 2nd hook. take the above advice lightly but do wut u gotta do. holla

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    Default Re: CTC Ft Youngnatho & Young Ghost

    Thanx to you all , i just reached 400 + and i take in what you say Clinton and thax you for that

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    Default Re: CTC Ft Youngnatho & Young Ghost

    No prob lil homie

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