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    Bilshot - Fuck You (Produced by Mantisfs)
    I wrote and recorded this diss track sometime last week and have been very cautious about releasing it or showing it to anyone as it contains such potent anger and hatred towards certain negative people I have met in my life. It has occurred to me how extremely angry and grotesque my expression seems to be in this track. I was quite hesitant to actually release this song as I believe it could be perceived as hate music because it is so vile and aggressive. But I will let you be the judges..

    ((WARNING** CONTAINS INDECENT & EXPLICIT LYRICS))


    Now, believe it or not, but I did actually edit it slightly and try to 'tone it down' but then I stopped after a couple of rhymes and adlibs as I didn't want to ruin the originality of this track. Some people may find it offensive while others will turn it off and refuse to listen to it, whereas certain heads out there appreciate diversity and understand complex outlets for expression such as this one, so if you are one of them fortunate & lucky people who is open-minded enough to appreciate the artistic expression in this song then I salute you! And I look forward to hearing your feedback..

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    Default Re: Bilshot - Fuck You (Produced by Mantisfs)

    I LIKE THE WAY THIS STARTS OFF MAN....SET ME UP FOR SOMETHIN EPIC...BUT THEN THE VERSE KICKED IN...IT SOUND LIKE THE AD LIBS ARE LOUDER THAN THE VERSES....AND WHEN U DOUBLE UP ON VOCALS...ONE IS SUPPOSE TO BE LOUDER THAN THE OTHER...THIS VOCALS MIX IS NOT THE WORST IVE HEARD BUT ITS NOT THAT GOOD NEITHER....I LIKE THE DIPSET FEEL ON THE BEAT....BUT WHEN I HEAR MEDIOCRE OR JUST A BAD MIX ON A RECORD IT TENDS TO PUSH ME AWAY FROM LISTENING.....I SEE WHERE YALL WERE GOING WITH IT THO...I LIKE WHEAT YALL WERE TRYNA DO...BUT THE MIX KINDA PUSHED ME AWAY....WHAT PROGRAM DO YALL USE TO RECORD WITH?

    GIVE ME FEEDBACK ON MY JOINT....
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    Default Re: Bilshot - Fuck You (Produced by Mantisfs)

    i like the beat and your rhymes are good..i like your delivery as well..the hook could use some work..it takes away from the song.
    Get out that box.

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    bro!! this tracks nice still, defo a big tune, i actually like the hard style your bringing on this one, i listened to some of your other work, and really think you suit that harder, more aggresive sounding track, lyrics are nice, and i like the hook, the beats nice too and fits well, really good work bro keep grinding

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    Default Re: Bilshot - Fuck You (Produced by Mantisfs)

    Yeah You Can Work On The Mixxed A Little Better
    It Would Help The Quality Of The Verse and Allow Me To Understand YOu
    the beat was ok but wish you could lower it
    hook could have been mixxed better
    6/10

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    nice lyrics I think with a better mix it would be a solid track.

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    Quote Originally Posted by acepro View Post
    THE MIX KINDA PUSHED ME AWAY....WHAT PROGRAM DO YALL USE TO RECORD WITH?
    Cheers 4 the feed Acepro -I've always used Audacity to record my raps, and for free software it's always done the job, I record with a condensor microphone too, don't really know of any better free recording suites tbh bruv -peace

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    Default Re: Bilshot - Fuck You (Produced by Mantisfs)

    Also Cheers 4 the feedback MarkGeeBeats & Kidd-n-Que!

    Just to clarify though, this track isn't actually a mix, I didn't mix the vocals in because it's a straight-up recorded song - Recorded the vocals straight over the beat. I actually added the Adlibs after as I thought the song was lacking emphasis, so perhaps if I removed the adlibs and kept it straight vocals the tune would sound more solid? -get back @ me -peace

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    Default Re: Bilshot - Fuck You (Produced by Mantisfs)

    I love this beat alot dude! You had a couple cool adlibs in there, your lyrics are pretty nice and you flowed, presentation could have been a little better along with the quality, but for the most part you've got a nice song here.

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    Default Re: Bilshot - Fuck You (Produced by Mantisfs)

    nice!!!!!!!!!!

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    Default Re: Bilshot - Fuck You (Produced by Mantisfs)

    ok...

    1. The vocals need compression because dynamically they are all over the place
    2. I love the fact I see the direction of the song and where its going. Don't take this as a diss but this is definitely early eminem/icp
    3. The overall song needs better mixing but with the right engineer/mixer this is a monster waiting to be unleashed
    4. I miss this style of rap and love to hear when its got a good direction to be done right. Get a better more commercially finished version of this track fam and your fans will start taking notice of your true talent

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    Default Re: Bilshot - Fuck You (Produced by Mantisfs)

    Track unavailable? CP just posted the link .. I was actually looking forward to hearing this one.
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    Default Re: Bilshot - Fuck You (Produced by Mantisfs)

    Sorry bro, I took it down to re-upload it without adlibs in 1st verse, let me know if it works for you now! -peace

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    Default Re: Bilshot - Fuck You (Produced by Mantisfs)

    Well done Bilshot! This got to #3 in the May 2012 Tracks & Songs Charts.
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    Default Re: Bilshot - Fuck You (Produced by Mantisfs)

    Unlucky Bilshot! This dropped to #4 in the June 2012 Tracks & Songs Charts.
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