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    Icon6 Bilshot ft R.Rampage - Please Leave

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    Quick-spitting collab track with hard-edge bars about getting fucked over by women and dealing with a broken heart.

    Song Structure:
    Intro
    Verse 1 - Bilshot
    Hook
    Verse 2 - Random Rampage
    Hook
    Verse 3 - Bilshot
    Hook

    CHECK IT OUT & DROP FEED:

    -peace

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    Default Re: Bilshot ft R.Rampage - Please Leave

    I think you need to turn the beat up or lower the vocals. Not a bad track tho. Ona side note....you sound a lot like Mr. Serv-On.

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    Default Re: Bilshot ft R.Rampage - Please Leave

    Okay, I like the vocals sounding louder than the beat on a heavy/aggressive concept track like this, makes sure people recognize whats being said ya get me fam. I am my own style but just out of curiosity who is mr.serv-on?? Never heard of him -peace

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    Default Re: Bilshot ft R.Rampage - Please Leave

    uppin for more feed

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    Default Re: Bilshot ft R.Rampage - Please Leave

    Not bad but if the quality of the track was better it would def make the song a whole lot better
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    Default Re: Bilshot ft R.Rampage - Please Leave

    I see u bro!! Trying to switch up your style... The accent makes for original rap that I don't hear much... I can vibe to this.. Keep it up my dude

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    Default Re: Bilshot ft R.Rampage - Please Leave

    Much love for the feedback -peace

    UPPIN MORE FEED

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    Default Re: Bilshot ft R.Rampage - Please Leave

    The beat is nice , it should be turned up doe . When you're rapping it's hard to hear . The flows for both needs to be worked on . It sounds like the lyrics could be enhanced by a bit of emphasis in some places . Overall not a bad song doe .

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    Default Re: Bilshot ft R.Rampage - Please Leave

    cheaaa i see you bilshot! check yo pm's!!!


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    Default Re: Bilshot ft R.Rampage - Please Leave

    ok...

    1. The mix is really bad and needs to be addressed
    2. flow is on point but its been done to death fam. I don't suggest changing it up but i do suggest changing up the feel of how you say your words with varying degrees of emotion.
    3. needs adlibs to truly bring out the emotion that's lacking in the song overall
    4. i really am listening to your lyrics and must say that even though you have some things against you this song is an album cut that real fans could love if you do it right
    5. +3.5

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    Default Re: Bilshot ft R.Rampage - Please Leave

    Much love for the feedback!

    >>UPPIN MORE FEED<<

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