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    Default Astyles - Feel Good snip

    It's only a snip because i'm waiting for my dude to do his verse but i might get on a 2nd verse because i like it. Looking to get some feed on it please. Peep, peace.

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    Default Re: Astyles - Feel Good snip

    your vocals on the intro are kinda low this is a nice beat who made it?

    I think that you should change the hook because it sounds like that G-Unit Joint Feels so good

    their hook goes "I keep sayin ion love these hoes i keep sayin ion love these hoes but you make me feel good ma you make me feel good" And the way the deliver it is kinda like you do

    your bridge that leads up to the hook is fiyah you have no emotion in your voice your sayin OHHH but it sounds like your sayin ohh... you dont seem to sure behind the mic you gotta get some swaga wit u

    if you want me to believe you it has to sound like YOU believe YOU otherwise its not believable

    lyrically you got some shit with you but because lack of swag and emotion i find myself drifting off thinking about whats on tv shit like that so all i can really say is change da feel good part cause it sounds like G unit and add some swag and emotion i give this a 7

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    Default Re: Astyles - Feel Good snip

    thanks for the feed, really appreciate it also. Yeah i heard the Gunit one lol. I used it differently tho, but yeah i can def do better on it. Thanks again.


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    Default Re: Astyles - Feel Good snip

    i actually like this track i don't think it's his emotion ef, i think it's he doesn't know how to mix...the vocals sound like they are on the wrong level in the mix, they sound way too low, and they sound drowned out....but the hook is cool, the g unit song was a much different pace than this and the meaning was different too....i like your flow

    overall the track is cool
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    now dat i got my pop filter maybe the mixes will come out better, thanks for the feed tho. appreciate it.
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    i don't even use a pop filter all that does is decrease the sound of breathes, it de-esses and it takes away pop sounds when u make b and p sounds

    it sounds like your compression needs work
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    actually theres alot more to it. The filter was just one of em, i'm trying to get my booth set up but i need some longer cords. It's not good to spit away from the mic especially in a room with some much reverb as mine. The sounds hit the walls quick, and that's not good of course. But little by little it was indeed a draft.
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    OK yup i heard this beat b4, its str8.. yea this track pretty coo but it seems like u aint usin enuf emotion on some parts, but shits koo mah ddue keep comin wit tha hot shit/

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    thanks for listenin, really appreciate it.
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