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    Default A new jam called "The City"

    A collab between me and a friend of mine.
    We worked together for the beat,
    so the song is completely original.

    tell me what you think guys


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    Default Re: A new jam called "The City"

    from what i hear shit is nice
    hook catcy but need more done try a few adlibs
    not to much just a lil

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    I agree... a few back up vocals would fill out some of the emptyness.... bit of work, and this would be a ver nice track

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    i like it really.

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    Default Re: A new jam called "The City"

    i agree about the vocals and maybe a better mixsdown

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    Default Re: A new jam called "The City"

    I agree with 247365. Lower the vocal track some,too. Other than that, I really like the minimal ammout of composition and hook's nice.
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    Default Re: A new jam called "The City"

    its not bad some parts throw your flow off but i agree with some of these guys could use some adlibs/ dub ya verse or summin

    keep at it

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    i would have chosen better sounds for the beat......

    Verses are exactly whats on the Radio...

    keep working on it

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    Default Re: A new jam called "The City"

    The beat is pretty dope i like....i feel there could be more to it....the hook simple catchy...not too big on it....but hey...what ever works for you....lyrics were good....other than that the song has potential just make sure you go in fill in those adlibs....double that hook and do the adlibs for it as well....and mix it down a little better
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    Default Re: A new jam called "The City"

    vocals are hot, beats cool give this a 9

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    I like the hook homie the beat is ok the vocal sound preety good i hear alot of compression on the vocals other then that nice songs
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    Default Re: A new jam called "The City"

    for a original beat,i think is cool,continue congratulations

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