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    Default A Cold Place Feat. Kashar & Halfbreed

    most of the people on here probably didn't know i spit rhymes aswell

    1st verse kashar 2nd verse and chorus me 3rd verse halfbreed

    the lyrics for my chorus and verse are on myspace


    oh and i made the beat

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    let me know what you think, all feedback will be returned a.s.a.p
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    Default Re: A Cold Place Feat. Kashar & Halfbreed

    lol bragger, j/k :wink2:

    Good Work man :D,

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    Default Re: A Cold Place Feat. Kashar & Halfbreed

    haha thanks man preciate it

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    Default Re: A Cold Place Feat. Kashar & Halfbreed

    im not really feelin da first dudes lyrics i mean it sounds aii but im just not feeling him. His swagga is aii but i wasn't feelin his content

    if your making your voice sound like that on da hook im not feelin it u got a good flow as well this is a laid back ass track remind me of some Q-tip shit where are you from? im not feelin your accent sometimes its aii but others its up and down

    once again im not feelin da hook and i guess i gotta listen to it a few more times cause tha point and what yall tryin to say is goin over my head i guess im getting that yall feel its a cold world out there but tha dude in da third verse made me believe yall are mad at tha state of hip-hop and how they thuggin

    ion no im confused i guess i give it a 5 im lost on da concept but da flows are good tha lyrical content is all over and im not feelin da hook at all

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    Default Re: A Cold Place Feat. Kashar & Halfbreed

    i'm from tasmania australia (home of taz the tasmanian devil) so basically i'm from the dirty south of australia haha thats why i've got a weird accent

    the song name is a bit ironic because down here its very cold, i did that on perpose


    i dunno why you weren't feelin' the chorus....its real talk

    (chorus)
    ...the world, is a cold, place
    ...good, people lose, old, mates..it generates,
    tears that cover up their whole, face,
    like they've done a deal with satan an the place,
    where their heart resides, is a sold, space

    (verse)
    ..i had some heart, and soul, but now i'm sellin' the space,
    but things from a devil will never replace,
    the passion my reaction is the time I've spent was a waste,
    I lost the sight of common cents that i chased,
    instead of gettin' first postion..with a word submision in events that i've placed,
    i can't forget the mistakes, i can't accept, forgiveness,
    but i hope, in time, people respect, the sickness
    ..or it will overload, my mind,
    an my mental, fitness, will start a slow, decline,
    just like a cheif of police,
    with a good, record for keepin' the peace,
    that can't protect, a witness..
    he feels, as helpless,
    as a kid that dropped, outta school and due 2 no, skills, is wealthless..
    he's takin' the wrong, road,
    he shoulda stayed on track, but he strayed, from the rails like a train with a long, load,
    he's losin' the plot..but refusin' to stop, like a violent person abusin' a cop,


    i dunno why you think the 3rd verse seems mad at hip hop...hes talking about his life and how people treat him as a rapper

    thanks for the feedback

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    Default Re: A Cold Place Feat. Kashar & Halfbreed

    its how it was delivered the way you spit that hook had me like this is not whats up you have to deliver better with a more solid flow behind you

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    Default Re: A Cold Place Feat. Kashar & Halfbreed

    Sorry i don't know what you mean...the flow is solid, the delivery is spot on, its deep and emotional....it seems like you don't like the chorus because i changed my vocal tone in it which is fine, but if i kept doing the same high pitch threw the chorus it wouldn't sound as good
    thanks for the feed again

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    Default Re: A Cold Place Feat. Kashar & Halfbreed

    I dunno about your accent man...you can't change so I'm not hating, it would just take a long time to get used to. The track is cool, but it's a little to backpacker sounding for me to really vibe out to. But the quality of the recording sounds great, well recorded and mixed.

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    Default Re: A Cold Place Feat. Kashar & Halfbreed

    Thanks, i dunno what u mean by backpacker sounding but thanks anyway
    yeah i did a fair bit of work on my vocals 2 make the quallity better, came out pretty clean

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    Default Re: A Cold Place Feat. Kashar & Halfbreed

    nah dont get me wrong man when i say flow behind you what i mean is like swaga you need to have more im da shit to your flow...right now it just sounds like you spittin rhymes your not really feeling it...

    as an emcee we embody personalities and each rhyme we write is suppose to tell a story or depict something within us or show us as listeners a different side of us different parts of us in short

    so when i was listening to this track i was having a hard time picking up your stance in your music and what your trying to get across with this song. Tha vibe is cool and lyrically its a good read but im not too much feeling it musically doesn't do it for me like tracks that sound like this normally do.i normally zone out and wonder shit

    but like a woods said quality of recording is great and u can't change your voice so no need to gripe bout it...tha more u rap tha more u will find a space for it on da mic

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    Default Re: A Cold Place Feat. Kashar & Halfbreed

    this shit is fire..havent herd a track like this ina minute

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    Default Re: A Cold Place Feat. Kashar & Halfbreed

    thanks alot man!...yeah its deffinatley got an oldskool sorta feel to it...mainly just because of the beat tho

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    Default Re: A Cold Place Feat. Kashar & Halfbreed

    oh....young ef...this does have swaga.....you would know that if you hurd some of my older tracks.....lyrically it doesn't have much swaga but delevery wise it does

    like you said in your track, this isn't my best work this is just the first track for my mixtape that i've mixed and mastered so far

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    Default Re: A Cold Place Feat. Kashar & Halfbreed

    i'm sorry, why are you posting tracks for opinions if you're not willing to accept the negative opinions? if you want fans and only positives show it to your friends, not a public forum

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    Default Re: A Cold Place Feat. Kashar & Halfbreed

    im really fellin this man, keep it up.

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