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    Default 3beatOFFtheTOPfreestyle

    me and my homeboy
    flowing over some instrumentals
    he laced
    truly off the TOP FREESTYLE
    SO HATERS CAN STFU

    LET ME SEE YOU POST SOME OFF THE TOP JOINTS

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    Default Re: 3beatOFFtheTOPfreestyle

    i told u to post the track already, and u never did...so please stop talking bs
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    god awful sorry dude

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    Default Re: 3beatOFFtheTOPfreestyle

    Quote Originally Posted by WillyWill View Post
    god awful sorry dude
    lol i told him the same thing and he got mad cuz i was styling on him
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    ay dude. Rather than all these other dudes, Imma give you some tips and constructive criticism. They were right about one thing: it wasn't very good. But that's okay. It seems like maybe you were trying too hard. You were talking about things you really didn't know about. Basically you were just trying to rhyme, which in a sense is what freestyling's about. But you also have to make sense. And when you freestyled, it sounded fake. Your voice was plain, bland, dull. You have to put your heart and soul into a freestyle, no matter what type of beat you're freestyling to. But it's important to always talk about what you know, not what you've heard about. I know that gets hard, especially when freestyling, but it all gets easier with practice. You had some weak punchlines here and there. You gotta tighten those up as well. If you're tryna make somebody laigh, you gotta really go hard and say some outrageous stuff! LOL. But I just wanted to share with you my point of view.
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